A Single Moment of Sincerity - Comments

  • Lipstick Lullabies

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    I just don't know what to say anymore.. I refuse to say anything useful until you post the next chapter... I'm just really curious.. So yeah.. I like snickerdoodles too.. just saying' :)
    May 23rd, 2012 at 02:51am
  • Daydream-away

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    This is my favorite story!!! Update!!
    May 22nd, 2012 at 10:18pm
  • moka4246

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    Amazing story - can't wait to see what happens next. I truthfully can't wait to see how the sequel turns out. Keep up the fantastic work. :-)
    April 25th, 2012 at 08:05pm
  • hachie

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    Okay so I am commenting again after what happened with Mibba.
    So Zack is taking his frustration out of Jordan and now she is pretty much tired of it.
    Even though she loves more than a cousin, Zack is just getting on her nerves with how he is treating her.
    And now it seems that she feels so alone because her best friend that she confide in doesn't believe her because she is drunk and Jack doesn't want to.
    I can't wait for the next update!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    April 22nd, 2012 at 08:46pm
  • jessibee

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    Haha! Can't wai t for the new chapter! Sorry it got deleted! :(
    April 22nd, 2012 at 05:45pm
  • Lipstick Lullabies

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    I got excited I thought there was a new chapter, but then I remember that the server crashed and recent stories were deleted.. so I was like, dammit... lol. I still love this story, I hope you update soon.
    Oh! and Jordan's In Trou-ble!!
    April 22nd, 2012 at 03:20pm
  • Permanent_Jetlag

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    The dayumn was a good thing though...
    March 14th, 2012 at 07:48am
  • outrage94

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    Omg amaazing!!! Keep writing :)
    March 12th, 2012 at 04:39am
  • Permanent_Jetlag

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    Wait, it's not over is it? I thought when she crashed it was. Sooo sorry about the other comment. And, kinda naughty, but, dayumn.
    March 9th, 2012 at 09:13am
  • holograms

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    omg, intense. i liked it!
    February 28th, 2012 at 07:50am
  • hachie

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    Woah....
    Now it seems that Zack has been practicing since he just blew Jordan away.
    I feel like Zack is acting fishy and he is very suspicious if you tell me!
    But the concern seems to genuine for her when he brought Nolan up.
    So the next chapter is bad in sense for Jordan???
    Now I am dying to know what will happen next!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    February 26th, 2012 at 10:08pm
  • heyJAYhey

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    woooooahhhhh so hot! i'm blushing like mad and i'm all alone in my room, i feel like such a loser xDD
    February 25th, 2012 at 03:59pm
  • Beccathecookie

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    Pretty good chapter, even of you hate it xD
    Just hope Zack doesn't hurt her again =/ hugs xx
    February 25th, 2012 at 12:09pm
  • becauseiamfree

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    this chapter was so fuckin hot ;)
    lets put it this way...
    i wouldnt mind a chapter like this ;)
    cant wait for more <3
    February 25th, 2012 at 11:06am
  • broken promise.

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    loves it chicka!!!=]
    February 25th, 2012 at 09:16am
  • Lipstick Lullabies

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    Uhm.... wow just wow.. Zack confuses me... like one minute he's like "Oh... we're cousins.. We can't do this.." and next moment, he's like "Let's fuck!".. He needs to pick.... I thought he would stop....I don't know. I feel bad for Bailey.. she knows nothing....
    February 25th, 2012 at 04:34am
  • Lipstick Lullabies

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    Uhm.... wow just wow.. Zack confuses me... like one minute he's like "Oh... we're cousins.. We can't do this.." and next moment, he's like "Let's fuck!".. He needs to pick.... I thought he would stop....I don't know. I feel bad for Bailey.. she knows nothing....
    February 25th, 2012 at 04:34am
  • broken promise.

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    This is soooo amazing! My new favorite story!! Ohhh, how I love incest stories! Lol
    February 16th, 2012 at 12:20pm
  • holograms

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    whoa, i forgot all about the spill canvas! fantastic as always.

    i would focus on them both. :)
    February 16th, 2012 at 05:43am
  • becauseiamfree

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    yessss new chapter :D
    i cant believe there parents are keeping them away :/
    please post up the next chapter ;)
    cannot wait for more <3
    February 15th, 2012 at 08:02pm