A Single Moment of Sincerity - Comments

Man there is so many lies going around the only one confused is the reader and Jordan!
I can't tell whether her mother is telling the truth about Zack pining the blame on Jordan, that she was in fact the one that started this whole game when it was Zack that started this whole bullshit that put Jordan through so much pain.
In all honesty Zack is a complete asshole.
At hospital he was kissing and groping Jordan like no tomorrow, and when she needed him, he just dismissed her and hung up on her.
But I do believe that there might be some truth behind what her mother said about Zack saying that Jordan wanted it because Zack has so much to lose.
His girlfriend Bailey, and his future, it really seems to me that Zack doesn't care that Jordan is going to take the fall.
I would say write from both POV on the sequel!
It would be exciting to read from Zack POV.
I am already hating Zack even more, and some what of Jordan too because she can't say no or stand up to Zack and he uses that to his advantage.
I definitely can't wait for the next update!

Yay update focus it on Jordan ;)

you're killing me! please please please post the next chapter :DD

I think That you should just keep doing what you're doing... I honestly just want to find out what happens next....

Love it so much Plz update!! :)

i love this story so much i hope you update soon <3

fdjksl'fjk ZACK! MAKE UP YOUR MIND!

"it's called a leotard" I smiled so big at that, guys never know what things are called xD

I'm so mixed, he told Jordan's secret but at the same time beat the crap out of Nolan, so I kinda love and dislike Zack right now =P
Great chapter thanks for updating =D ooh btw what's your tumblr URL? I'll follow you x

i dont know whether i should say how cute zack is for kissing her or want to slap him for kissing her.
anyways amazing chapter
cant wait for more <3

this is so well written! i found myself entranced by all of the characters right off the bat. it's very personable, i love it.

Okay I am very confused to why Zack is acting like that.
First he says they need to spend time away when comes in as her knight shining armor when he beat the crap out of Nolan.
Now he kisses her, I wonder what he is up too.
But now the other guys know what has been going between her and Nolan and they want to kick that coward's ass for hurting her.
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh, my God! I never thought that I would say this, but
WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH ZACK!!! I mean..... Dammit....I hope he's not gonna use Jordan ... again...I swear... you should totally see my face right now...

oh my god Zack D; i think my hearts in two now,
still, at least she didn't die i guess =P

But still, why zack why D;

oh and yes sequel please please please- Hugs xx

i cant believe her mom read her diary!!!
and i cant believe she just drove into a fucking tree!!!
arhhhhhhhh!!!
please update soon before i go nuts!
<3

AAAAAHHHHHHH! :D make me hate him!! I can't wait lol. A sequel would be great I'd love to see how it would turn out ;D

AHHH IM SO HAPPY KNOW LOVE THE STORY and totally would love a sequel

Yay for an update!! And yes, i would love a sequel.

And I don't think I could ever hate on Zack, even if he does beat up Nolan. Can't wait for the next update and hopefully a sequel. :-D

jfkdlsjdkl DYING! I AM DYING! i love this story so so so much xD Definitely sequel!

MOREEEEE :)

THANK GOD!
You definitely psyched me to thinking that the chapter before this one was the very lastchapter!
I can't believe Zack didn't catch on that he was leading Jordan and when he finally realized that Jordan fell in love with him.
And he basically told her that he used her to improve his skills so he can use it on his precious Bailey.
And Jordan believed that Zack might have had some feelings for her but now she knows that he was just using her and he didn't feel anything except that she is his cousin.
He also knows that Nolan has been beating her since Jordan got scared when Zack raised his voice to her.
So is Zack is going to do something that'll make me hate him even more than I do right now?
Now I wonder what could he possible do that is worst than completely shattering Jordan's heart.
Yes to a FREAKING SEQUEL!!!!!!
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!