As I'm Pacing the Pews - Comments

This is my all time favorite story and I've re-read it like 5 times. Just thought I'd let you know that.

This legit made me cry

I HATE YOU WHY THE HELL DID NICHOLAS DIE WHAT DID HE DO TO YOU WWWWWHHHHHHYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I've had an ex lover die so I know this feeling, but it's rare for a story on here to provoke such emotions in me. Thanks for the tears. :) Great writing skills, great grammar, and original plot. 3 things you never find on mibba. <3

wow... that literally has me in tears. it was so sad.

I don't know what to say!! That was so heartbreaking but a lovely story indeed. Great job!!!

oh my gosh I listened to caroline for the last chapter, and noooooooo! I didn't think it would end this way

This was beautiful. I wished and wished for a happy ending but I think I knew from the beginning that I wasn't going to get one.

T..T You are just plain evil. It was a great story! I congratulate you!

One word wow. The last two chapters of this story seriously had me tearing up. That was so increadible. It kept me at the edge of my seat. No lie! Dearest u are the shit!!!! Do us all a favor and never stop posting stories on mibba :D

Im only on ch.4 but miss I must say DAMN! okay im going back to my new addiction now XD

You left me crying at the end..sad that he had to die..
I was listening to so far away and it made me cry even more so much so I'm still crying :(
Amazing story!

...i loved it...i just don't know what to say...why did he have to dye?

I... almost cried at that ending... I love this story. It's amazing...

Awhh he's dead:,( *sniffle!* I cwied soo hard!!

So i found this and read it in about three days, must say its AMAZING!!! :) Really, great job. I didn't catch on that Noah was making Nicholas a new sketch pad, but when Agatha turned up with the cut on her wrist I did have this little lightbulb discovery moment where i was like "It's her!!! I know shes the killer!!!!" lol Anyways good job. I liked the story very much. :)

NOOO! Why'd he have to die! I loved the story,though. But I admit I was crying like a baby at the end!

I cried through the whole last chapter...
I was listening to So Far Away while reading, and that song alone makes me cry..
This story is amazing, thank you for sharing it

Just so you know, this was magical.
One of my favorite stories ever.

Wow, I'm blown away. I started this two hours ago and literally couldn't stop until i finished it. I'm in tears right now, it took me forever to read the last chapter because i couldn't stop crying. I had something like this happen to my best friend recently, obviously with lack of serial killers and such, but i loved her and always will. You really nailed how i felt through Noah. It's not an experience i enjoyed, but i still appreciate a writer who can make me call upon those emotions with only words. Thank you for being dedicated to your writing. It was a privilege to read it.