As I'm Pacing the Pews - Comments

This has been the best story I have ever read. It captured my emotions fully and I connected with it on such a deep level. I truly loved it. I adore your writing style and how you capture you're characters. I can see you going somewhere because I sobbed at the end.. I couldn't believe Nicholas died. I just couldn't. This will always be my favorite. How I connected to it was crazy and I loved it so much ... Im going to posting it on my tumblr almost every day for other people to read it. Keep up the good work like this. If you ever write something other like this... tell me okay? I can't wait to read your other work.

I read the last chapter on September 29th. It's October 17th and i still tear up when i think of this story. THAT'S HOW AMAZING YOU AND THIS STORY ARE!!
I just thought i'd let you know :')
This story has to be one of my favourites, no matter how absolutely upsetting it is.
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Oh wow I read all of this in one day and when Nicholas died I swear I think my heart stopped. Meh Good story >_< So sad though

I had this story up as a tab on my computer to 2 -3 days. I had a feeling not to read it until I had time, and was in the right mood so to say. Today I read the entire story, beginning to ending, every word. I have to say I never ever thought once his sister was the killer, and when I did know it all went together so well, i couldn't believe it. I was solely touched when he died and was really dead, but the ending was so perfect it took away any pain I had for him. The ending was perfect. This story was breathtaking and it will always be in my heart. I feel as though it ended to early but if it ended any later it may have been dragged on too much....
You are really, a very amazing writer. I believe if you thought about it enough, edited slightly, and added detail you could seriously make this a book. It wouldn't take much either, at the same time it would take a lot. Really I feel you could do it. Have you ever read a book that was a slash? Or a book even close to this? Imagine how many teens would feel touched or not alone (in a way) if they had the amazing opportunity to read this. Really i'm quite serious.
Even if you decide to leave this story and move on to another it'll still hold a place in my heart.

God, I cried so much. You're an amazing writer. Just, danggit. I couldn't stop crying. It took me forever to read the last couple of chapters. :(

So, I'm crying like a little bitch right now. Thanks for that.
I just want to say that I sooooo did not see that coming. In all honesty, I kinda thought Nicholas was the killer -_- I really didn't expect it to be Agatha though. (I think I spelled her name wrong.)
Anyways, this story is so amazing. I'm probably going to be late for my class now because I couldn't stop reading it, but oh well. Totally worth it.
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oh my god. this is.. really sad. i'm crying after i read the ending :( its like my body is shivery and so emotional! whyyyyyy why did he have to die, so sad :( i knew it was her all along. especially after the conversation with nicholas and she said "oh i hope you both die" i could tell she was crazy. he should have defended himself! nooooo :( poor noah!!!! now what do i do?? there is no more to read cause thats it, its overrrr :(

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Why?
So sad.....

I loved this story.
Honestly, I kind of expected either Nicolas or Noah to get killed...mostly Noah.
But I never even thought Agnes would be the killer.
I don't know if you'll make a sequel for this or not,
but in my head, Matt and Noah became friends and then got together :}

I was not expecting you to kill Nicolas, I almost cried. :( It was still an amazing story though.

I cried like a baby . . . I'm glad it's past midnight and I'm the only one awake and here at my house . . .

Gaaaah I hate you. I love Nicholas. I love Noah. And damn, Nicholas didn't deserve his crazy ass sister doing that. Noah didn't derserve it.

But that was a BA ending. I didn't really cry like a baby, just let a manly tear or two escape. "Manly" even though I am not a dude. *sniffles*

Gaaaaaah DX

That actually broke my heart, but I guess not every story has a happy ending. It really was an amazing story, one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read on here, and I kept looking forward to seeing your updates. I hope I'll find another story of yours that I'll love just as much, if not more, because you are too good to give up. I mean, I know I've said I've loved your other stories (especially Shame, Shame On Me, and Baby It's Cold Outside), but that...

...that was just an amazing story.

R{I}P Nicholas <3

No. Fucking. Way. Man. :'(

I'm still crying . <|3 while listening to a drop in the ocean , I
Read the last two chapters balling . x'c
I seriously can't stop crying . <\3<|3 ;c

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I... I just... ): god, this is so sad. Why did he have to die? Noah, oh poor Noah. I ... I cried. God, I cried )':
Apart from the obviously very upsetting ending, this was bloody amazing. I really hope you write a sequel or something. I want to know how Noah survives.
But yeah, it was good, really good (:

it's so sad that this story is over): I love it.):

Oh my God! I'm frickin' crying right now!! :'( I was not ready for something that emotional!! But at the same time is was so beautifully written.
I'm devastated that this story is over and that Nicholas is dead. It has to be one of my favourite stories even though it's so unbelievable sad!!
This has been amazing to read and i can't wait to read other stories by you because you are a fantastic writer :')
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but anyways this has been one of my favourite stories
and i'm so sad it's finished :(
it's been brilliant, though!

oh my gosh i can't believe it actually happened.
it actually fucking happened.
WHY
WHY WHY WHY IS NICHOLAS DEAD? :"((((((((((((((((((((((((((((

i need an ocean for all my tears :"(