AHHHH Okay, so I was interupted about two times reading this fantabulous story. One time from my best friend, and another from my crush :3 WHEE this is a happy day. :D I LOVE THE STORY KEEP READING! Oh and sorry for the random rant xD
oh wow. loving the new layout. tis so freakin cool. I've been such a bad reader cuz i havent commented in ages...so here is a comment from me to you saying how good and simple this story is to read :)
I like the story. First, I thought this relationship was going to be too easy but it's not haha. I think it's awesome but you really should try to write longer POVs. Anyway, keep up the good work. I'll keep reading and commenting.
A very good story. I actually can't think of any critisism so I'll say the good things: it's the perfect length so you dont get bored reading so much, there's no crazy layout to distract you, the dialog is good and the story is intresting. now.update.now