You're Never Gonna Fit In Much, Kid. - Comments

Fucking. Drunk. Bitch. ><
If my son's boyfriend was Gerard Way, I would have made him move in xD
Anyways, great chapter :)

I commented, so you better update ^^

Oh so his mom is a drunk now is she? Huh. To bad. Well it adds o the story so ita good. But bad for Frank. I noticed how it's getting bette. I like. And you need a co authour? -shyly raises had- you can read some of my work on my page if you'd like to see if I qualify. O would check out Forever After cause I took over WYLMALIIHYAN nice abbreviation I got there, eh? So yeah I'd love to help :$

Omg I love this story. I just love the way you write. I just want to punch Frank's mom in the face, and I want to like murder his dad. -evil grin-

Update soonage?

xoxo

Serious...
Everytime someone reads my story...
They become comment whores themselves.

Ah drama!!! Gimme more gimme more

welll....... im addicted... lol. cant wait for more!

:D
love you too
And yay quick update!!!
the calm before the storm, huh?
BRING IT ON!
Just... please tell me this story has a happy ending though...

What a nice way to finish my day (yes I work until late at night, bookwork sucks. PS don't get into the music industry, its really really hard, no matter how much you love it don't do it cuz it'll be the death of you) okay sorry about my crazzy rant but yes i love this story and yes im generally pretty good at guessing when drama is about to happen, but I cant wait. So...

...HUURY UPPPPPP

okay im done...

wait...

yep Im done
Jess

AAAAW! More cutenesss. :))

So...
What your saying is...
I have more drama in my story???
0_o
it never lasts that long.
:P

So I guess there was an update after I left my comment? Haha, my opinion is still the same! But the dialogue is better! Great job! :)

Alright! Time for my comment! What u like was that you cleared things up! Yay! Every thing is coming together better now! I mean it obviously is just getting started and plot is gonna have to thicken we're gonna learn more about the chararcters. What's really good is that you have the conflict out there! Thats great! And I get that Frank is bi polar so his change rapidly. But I still feel thy they need to be expressed. And I don't wanna sound mean but I think there should be a bit kore dialogue? I dunno, it's your story of course that just my recommendation. That what I do and my readers seem to enjoy it! Antares overall great chapter! I'm glad were getting into things! I am so excited that it's been pointed out that their realtipnship is illegal! Yay! I really wanted that out there! ;3 great job!

aww Frankie... ^^ that was a cute chapter
Can't wait for the next one and the drama coming up... oooooh!
:)
PS: yay I got mentionned!

I must say that this is shockingly cute and still quite simple to read, which I love right now. and thank you for the frequent updates. I hate to think what frankie's mom will think of Gee. I bet she's gonna be mad.

Love
Jess :)

Idk if I should be scared to read tha or not...........
I don't like drama muchz

But we (well at least I do) love filler-ish/filler chapters just as much as the other ones.

HA HA HA PAGE CLAIM BITCHES!!!

Why do I feel like something bad is gonna happen... o.O
nice chapter xD
got sad at the scars, but then smiled at the girlyness of Frankie and Gee-gee. ^^

I love how you write, your chapters are a good length and you get the story across. The dialogue is perfect and the story interesting <3
great one again
:D

Im glad that Gerard and Frank are talking about the whole illegal part of their relationship... although I have this sneaking suspiscion that they aren't gonna let that stop them if they don't want it to.