Scream - Comments

@ violetshade
The schoolgirl/teacher sex scene between Brian and Jess is in Nightmare, not Scream. Chapter 5 - Back to School
Something must be wrong with me because I'm equal parts terrified of this Shads and turned on by him

@ Brian Haner Jr
Haha, right?!? It was seriously freaky, though. Shadz is mother effin' hawt, but your Shadows in this story just freaks me right the hell out! I was trying to find the schoolgirl/teacher chapter to share w/ a friend, and after reading a couple chapters ("I want to see your insides" brick) I gave up b/c I was freaking myself out, lol!

@ violetshade
Is it truly a nightmare if it involves Shadows though?

"She's my ocean."
Ok, so I might be a little obsessed with this story! Started rereading parts of it (ok, the smut) and couldn't help but start reading all of it!!! It actually gave me a nightmare where I was trapped in a building being stalked by a murderous Shadows, but I keep reading anyway ; )

@ violetshade
Syn on a bike is a must, I couldn't go passed it. He really should be illegal

HOLY FUCK. Reading this as fast as I can. Just got to the end of 35 and YES Brian on a fucking bike. I can totally see it (thanks to it also being a TOTALLY HOT magazine article with him and *sigh* Shadows on big bikes). Fuck Syn is so hot! HE should be illegal.

@ AJDWriter
Thank you for commenting, and for reading. I hope you continue to enjoy it

Fucking hell; I came here to do my second giveaway critique, but I can't even try to attempt it because this story is too amusing to even start! I love your character development. You have a phenomenal sense of humor. I'm just going to keep reading until forever.

oh shit that is amazing!! so excited to read the sequel [=

This story is fucking amazing. End of story. Im impressed good job.

@ Spiralling Shape
Yes, yes I am Australian
Thank you for reading, and for enjoying the story. I'm glad you hear you liked it! I hope Nightmare doesn't disappoint :D

So, a friend recommended this to me and I read all of it all in a couple of days. Such a great story. I don't think I've ever laughed out loud at. A story which this had me doing several times : D can't wait to start on Nightmare.

Also, on a side note, are you Australian? It kind of comes across in your writing haha (not much, just certain expressions)

@ Brian Haner Jr
You're most welcome, I loved it!
Haha, I kind of went a teeny bit over board, but if it made your day then my job here is done XD

@ RachTheBat_
I thank you for not only reading this here story, but for commenting too! I'm glad you enjoy it!! :D
And thank you for the awesomeness that is your comment, it made my day XD

Firstly, I apologize for the size of this huge ass comment and the general disorder of it all, it doesn't make much sense to me and I’m writing it XD
Secondly, Mibba needs a love button. I love you for writing this. I commend you for writing one hundred chapters, I can’t even manage ten at the moment. People shouldn’t be put off by how long it is, just means there’s more to love :)
With that said, let the comment commence!

“Sevenfold Pizza, how can I avenge you?” Oh Zack. LOL
“I’m thinking how best to show you I’m better with my mouth.” That whole chapter had me swooning so hard I fell off my chair! More bruises to add to my ass XD
I love that they all play video games! :D
Creepy Matt is creepy. I wanted to punch him for what he did to Jess *shakes fist*
I concur chapter twenty nine was pretty damn awesome! Kept me right on the edge of my seat! I watched the video for Parkour and visualised Brian doing it all. Hot.
I freakin’ love Socks!! “Yes, I am watching you and silently judging you, you horn dogs”
I love that half the family decided to come and see what Brian and Jess were doing. Hilarious!
“My jizz has healing properties.” XDXDXD
“I think my erection has been banished forever.” Poor Bri haha. Daddy Neeson, the ultimate cock block.
‘He pressed his come covered fingers to her image’.. yeah cause nothing says romance like a load of come smeared all over your face. XD
‘They’d watched the sunset through the double French doors linked to her room and he’d made love to her.’ What a visual I have. this whole chapter had me hugging myself!
I love you Johnny Christ, you awesome human you. More tears.
Not condoning what Matt did, but I feel for the guy. He’s obviously fucked up.
I want to hug you for using Na'Vi love that film so much.
Dun dun dun.. big bad Shads is out and proud XD
OWNED! also, those last two gifs. Oh my!
Jess kicks ass! Yes! Girl power!
Weird looking? Really? Maybe you should go get your eyes checked, try getting a personality at the same time.
Zacky wins at life, he has Thor on the side of his hacker van.
N’awww! And now he’s all smooshy and lovey dovey with Calliope
No no no! They can’t have her! She’s Brian’s! *panic face*
Kitty gifs are the best gifs!
Okay, I think I have an inkling as to what is going to happen, but I will keep my lips sealed as not to spoil it for anyone else. I hate spoliers.
Oh my god, Johnny is a giant teddy bear!! Ahahaah! Genius!
“Come at me bro! I can fucking take you and your prettiness.”
“Wow, she wasn’t lying. You can bounce a fucking nickel off that ass.” LOLOLOL Calliope how I love you! “And I don’t want Queen of the Damned biting my head off and drinking my blood because she didn’t get her fuck on in time. Now get that tight ass up there, sate that Lioness and then get out.” Again.. LOLOL
Ahh I love playing games with cryptic clues *claps hands together excitedly*
No Matt don’t spoil their little game! Bad Matt. Socks made it better, the image of a cat in converse. Oh wow.
Okay.. chapter 72, SOMEONE COME AND HOLD ME BECAUSE THIS WAS PERFECT. *SOB* The music. Sigh.
The image I have of Billy dancing is this XD
It may be just me, but I find the whole “marking the territory” thing hella sexy!
Oh Shads.. because nothing says I love you better like a box full of human skin.. XD
Oh Bri, you need to tell her the truth.
I love your description of Papa Gates, he is one giant flirt! I adore the man!
Oh Zacky and Calliope are just too cute!
Oh no! Tears, lots of tears! You bastard not the twins! Ohh *cries*
Oh my god he’s alive! He’s alive I tell you! :D
So… chapter 83 huh… *fans face*
“Oh don’t try it Zane, I was actually just sitting here, thinking about how sexually attracted to Cloud Strife I am. With all that Mako enhancement running through his veins, he must be hung like a horse.” LOLOL
Oh James. :(
Ugh. Carmella needs to go and die an incredibly slow and painful death.
I love Brian and James’s bromance. So cute, and I swear that cat is just fucking awesome!
Uh oh, shit’s gonna hit the fan son!
Oh Brian. *sob*
‘Dear Rachael, fuck off & die, kthnxbye.’ My sentiments exactly.
Okay, Mr Gates is insanely hot! Phew.
“Get me The Rev.” Holy cow I did not see that coming! My face was the same as Misha’s in that last gif!
I KNEW IT I KNEW IT AHHHH! Haha. Okay ahem. The Rev is the perfect hit man and now he’s going after Brian. I don’t think there are any emotions left in me. I’m an empty shell! Oh wait, there’s more crying. BRIIIIII! *sob* I love Johnny in this chapter, I could just squish him! Papa gates, I want your babies.
“Short? Weren’t you?” He over dramatically sighed, slumping in his seat with a pout. “I could totally wear heels if it bothers you.” Oh johnny.

I must admit I was all Team Matt at the start, the way you described the chemistry between him and Jess had me fanning myself a few times I can tell you! He’s so incredibly ruthless and hard hitting. But as Brian got introduced I found myself rooting for Mr Haner more and more! It’s like they were made for each other. I pretty much swooned all over the place at every single sex scene XD
You write them so very well!
Jess is so badass and sassy and Calliope and her non-filter oh man, I love her! I love Liam, so calm and collected and loves them all fiercely. The twins, oh my god the twins I love them! I love them all XD except Rachael. Ew. Go and face plant a concrete block please. I love the banter between them all.

I've fallen completely and utterly in love with this! It's a complete gem of a story. I think I felt every emotion known to man reading this! I laughed, I cried (Brian’s proposal. Oh my gawwwd) and I laughed some more, wanted to punch my screen, then hug it. Gahh!! Took me just two days to read it all, I couldn't stop! The plot is amazing, genius idea! I bow down to you, you truly are amazing and so so talented!! You had me sucked in from the word go. Incredibly believable and your attention to detail is to be applauded. Not to mention your choice of gifs at the end of some chapters. Some had me rolling on the floor laughing!

I just freakin love it! The dialogue is awesome. You win at life.

This is me now I’m a big ball of emotion right now and I need a hug after that ending!

Now that I’ve finished gushing (metaphorically speaking of course XD) I shall go and immerse myself in the sequel

Primeira reação ao ver o menu: SANTO DEUS! But. criando coragem para abrir o capítulo 1 =)

@ FlyAway.
First of all, thank you so much for taking the time to actually read my story. A lot of people see the '100 chapters' and do not pass go I commend you for sticking with it.
Secondly, thank you so much for taking the time to comment with such depth. It's refreshing to get a comment that has more than three words in it!
Thirdly, I'm incredibly happy that you enjoyed it and that Scream is still being enjoyed by new people after more than a year of being finished.

I hope you enjoy the sequel just as much and look forward to hearing what you have to say about it :D

My. Fucking. God.
First; you are an amazing and talented writer. You had me crying, laughing, wanting to punch my computer, UGH just a complete emotional wreck over here through all 100 chapters. I cried for the first time EVER reading a story. (Child called 'It' doesn't count!).
Second; I usually can't read stories that have the characters in different personas other than them being 'Avenged Sevenfold, the band', simply because a lot of people do not know how to form the characters, write the plot, etc. You took this to a RIDICULOUS level and I loved every chapter, every sentence, every word. It has taken me a total of four days(not as in 'I-have-no-life-and-just-sat-down-to-read-this'. I use my nights to read lol) and that including an all-nighter to read this story and I enjoyed every minute.
Third; you are a sadistic person, but in a good way LOL. Making Matt stay alive? Not the twist I wanted, but it happens, and it leaves it open for the sequel--which brings me to my fourth point;
I AM OFF TO READ THE SEQUEL! (:

Once again, fantastic writer, fantastic idea. If I could recommend this 1000 times, I would. ♥

holy hell thats a long story!!!

@ Brian Haner Jr
It's some Jewish thing. Like a game or something.