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  • XxshadowsraynexX

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    Okay, I know this is a little late but OMFG THIS WAS AMAZING!!! I just spent the last few weeks forsaking schoolwork and social gatherings reading this! You're an amazing writer and this story was soo imaginative and just awesome!!! I'm gunna start on Nightmare RIGHT NOW and hopefully I catch up before you finish it! I could see EVERYTHING in this story as if it were a movie, especially the last two chapters. I dunno if you've ever been to Huntington Beach [you must've] because there's LITERALLY a ruby's on the pier, I used to go there all the time in high school. Anyway, you're too fucking amazing and I love your work. Oh, and all those gifs are awesome too! Okay, I'll try to stop my virtual worshipping now lol
    May 17th, 2012 at 02:39am
  • All About Lovin' You

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    Hey hey! I've just spent the last gazillion days reading this, and wow, what do I say. Seriously, amazing. The lovely Subculture Shadows was the one who brought the work of Scream to me, so i can't thank you both enough. I'm looking forward to starting to read Nightmare now *jumps up and down like an excited six year old* anyways, one again, loved it!

    Aimee.
    April 17th, 2012 at 03:07pm
  • Angel of Vengeance

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    Already told you through a profile comment, but holy shit. This was fucking amazing and I loved it. Subscribing to Nightmare if it hasn't been completed yet, because damn I am looking forward to reading more! You have also inspired me to write my own story about a girl with many brothers...hehehe
    March 24th, 2012 at 07:25pm
  • ImaginaryPangolin

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    ....i finally finished this, its taken me soo long, but now im sad its over cuz ive laughed aloud, cried, been terrified and basically everything else, which in a shorter sentence means this was an absolutely beyond awesome story... im glad matt grew out of his massive insanity a little at the end though, and the rev -- well he was just win xD now, im going to go right now and start on the sequel =D
    February 27th, 2012 at 10:00am
  • ImaginaryPangolin

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    I just read 32 chapters of Scream with no breaks, and im hooked already. though i cant help but feel sorry for matt since hes just a tad majorly-uber-crazy xD anyways, what i just have to say, is the pictures at the bottoms of the chapters are beyond awetastic ^.^ especially syn's weird faces <3
    January 27th, 2012 at 09:47am
  • SpankMyFrank

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    Read it. Had a friend read it at the same time. We fangirled over it. Screamed. Cried. Yelled. She told me not to spoil it...

    I did.

    All in all, I loved the story. I know there's a sequel, and I will get to that tomorrow, but I just want to say:

    Bravo.

    This story is fantastic. I could never keep a story going this long, and I praise you for it. This is the first Avenged Sevenfold fic that I've ever read (seeing as I just got to the stage of loving the band that I can read fanfiction about them), and I loved it. It's had be craving for more with every chapter that's passed.
    January 15th, 2012 at 07:14am
  • ThePiesEndure

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    I just stumbled on this...at 2 am this morning...lol. I'll have to read properly when I'm more awake, but I'm enjoying it so far.

    I really love how you write dialogue it sounds so real in my mind.

    I will definitely have to subscribe. [I am a huge Shadows fan, but an even bigger fan of amazing writing.]
    January 13th, 2012 at 08:02pm
  • Bubblygum

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    This was by far the best story i've read, your a great writer. Amazingly amazing!
    January 7th, 2012 at 10:59am
  • unmask your desire

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    Okay, I honestly don't know why I'm commenting this again, but yeah I'm re-reading this since I'm super goddamn bored at night and I cant sleep, anyway you know that one part when Brian tells Jason that he's gonna fuck Jess? I saw this gif the other day and I just imagine this is how he'd look:

    Image

    /end of cool story bro lol
    January 6th, 2012 at 12:44am
  • burning.

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    Jfkaksndjdo. Damn it.

    I read this in a span of three weeks because I was busy and school sucked and djakqncod, but I finally got to the end and it was just like. Holy crap. This was so addictive and I don't even have words to describe this besides amazing. Let me love you, okay? <3

    I bawled when Jess shot Matt and he was all, "It's okay, it was an accident" and she was sprawling over him and worrying and he just wanted her to be happy. It was all heart breaking and I couldn't take it. The tears were falling down my cheeks so much. D:

    I can't wait to read the sequel and get abducted into another one of your stories <3
    xo,
    burning.
    December 23rd, 2011 at 09:23pm
  • Miss Sanders

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    Awesome Story. I really enjoy reading it. your a great writer.
    December 11th, 2011 at 10:31pm
  • Norma J

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    Okayy so I'm like only on chapter 47 and I checked to see how many chapters there were and it turned out there are a 100 chapters plus a sequel!! 0.o
    Good god woman!!
    Are you trying to kill me???
    My brain is going to spantaneously combust with all this reading!! >.>
    But that was all apart of your magic plan wasn't it??
    Alsooo, Idunno?
    Great story so far!! :D
    December 6th, 2011 at 12:14am
  • Mz Hyde

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    So, I only just discovered this story, but I've sat for about 3 days reading it.
    I cried more than you can imagine.

    Even though I hated Matt (in the story though, I could never hate him in real life), I cried when she shot him.

    *goes to read the sequel*
    I shall now be commenting heaps. >:D
    November 25th, 2011 at 12:56pm
  • kelly yells love.

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    This is a masterpiece. Honestly, you are so talented and I read this for two days straight and I am just speechless.
    November 25th, 2011 at 06:52am
  • ShuperGurl143

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    OMFG THIS TOOK ME 2 WHOLE DAYS TO READ.... I LOVE IT ...... YOU ARE JUST SO AWESOME.... NOW IM OFF TO READ NIGHTMARE HEHEHE...... GREAT STORY LINE AWESOME WRITING AND BEAUTIFUL SCENES ..... I LOVE THE GIFS ALSO THEY MADE MY DAY..... PERFECT ENDING TO A PERFECT STORY...... :)
    November 24th, 2011 at 05:33pm
  • likaa

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    Woooo, best story ever. Love it with a FAT passion lol. thanks for this amaaaazing story. now ima be like Matt and stalk the shit outta your page coz im obessed with your stories muwahahahaa! you da best lol
    November 21st, 2011 at 08:38am
  • xdeceit

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    I love you! this story was absolutely amazing. thank you for being a genious! ;)
    November 17th, 2011 at 04:20am
  • angelamalfoy

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    :3
    November 15th, 2011 at 02:03pm
  • Through-the-Night

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    100 Chapters and a Sequel!

    Congratulations!
    November 15th, 2011 at 02:45am
  • Juno

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    *stands and applauds*

    Rev to the rescue. =]
    I can't wait for a sequel to see what the hell happens next.

    And thank you for the shout-out at the end. It made me feel warm inside. And I know you won't forget about the layout...that's why i gave you a front row seat into my story. *hugs*

    Beautiful story. The longest I've ever read and actually wanted to keep reading. Your writing is amazing and I'm currently waiting for another one to catch my eye.

    *bows to the amazing aussie* Cheers to you, mate!
    November 15th, 2011 at 02:36am