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  • OctoberA7X

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    God shadows is freaking hot..! I wonder what he's got planned..!
    August 28th, 2011 at 02:03pm
  • SHADOWS COURTESAN

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    I don't think Matt killed any of those people
    As for Jess a part of her already likes him, wondering what he did for Christmas
    If she wins the case I think she should give him a chance
    About the note, 99.9% of guys are perverts it doesn't make them bad guys
    After all he did make that latino inmate apologize to her
    I'm ALL for Matt
    I don't believe he's as bad as he's made out to be
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    August 28th, 2011 at 09:00am
  • Through-the-Night

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    I like the name Zane, it reminds me of sane...I wanna know what it means...Apparently "Godly Light" according to some baby name website...I like her brother Jason by the way :D
    August 28th, 2011 at 06:23am
  • OctoberA7X

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    Okay first of all: Jensen Ackles is awesome

    Second: I love love love this layout..!

    Third: I love the length of your chapters..

    Fourth: I am subscribing forever..!

    Fifth: in this story you make Matt sound so freaking hot..! I know he's supposed to be a murderer but that only adds to the hotness..!

    Sixth: you have got to update and soon..!

    Seventh: if you don't..my ninja assassins will be paying you a visit and not to bring brownies either..
    August 28th, 2011 at 05:41am
  • bloodyvengeance

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    I like her brothers they seem awesome.
    Hm I wonder what Matt did in X-Mas?
    August 28th, 2011 at 05:09am
  • a venom

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    loving this story and can't wait for more
    August 27th, 2011 at 11:20pm
  • Synnatural

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    Lovelovelovelove.
    Keep up the amazing work!
    August 27th, 2011 at 08:25pm
  • bloodyvengeance

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    Hm, how many brothers does she have? it sounds like a lot.
    If she can protect herself maybe Matt won't hurt her.
    August 27th, 2011 at 04:10pm
  • Synnatural

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    You have fantastic writing. Not too descriptive, just enough and just enough dialogue too.
    Matt sounds super sexy aha, I hope it works out in HIS favor. Can't wait for more!!
    August 27th, 2011 at 07:02am
  • Tired of The Lying

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    Hell.Yes.

    This exactly what I've been waiting for! Lovelovelove it(:
    August 27th, 2011 at 06:29am
  • bloodyvengeance

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    Wow, Shadows is just evil sounding. I wonder what he meant when he mentioned Gate's?
    But great update. :)
    August 27th, 2011 at 05:03am
  • Through-the-Night

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    It was interesting to see things from Shadow's point of view. He seemed so much more sinister. I'm now really curious as to where this story will go. I had previously read a story with a similar beginning where the guys were in prison and broke out, kidnapping the girls who I believe were reporters. Anyways! A really great update and cheers for two in a day!
    August 27th, 2011 at 04:52am
  • Synful Shadows

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    I absolutely love this story and cannot wait for the next chapter!
    August 27th, 2011 at 03:33am
  • SHADOWS COURTESAN

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    Great chapter
    I love this story
    Update soon
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    August 27th, 2011 at 02:59am
  • synyster sykes

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    omg loved it especially the last part of that chapter please update again soon:)
    August 27th, 2011 at 02:56am
  • Jessickax

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    I love this so far, can't wait for the next update! :)
    August 26th, 2011 at 11:02am
  • D. Dixon

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    Amazing story so far! Don't worry about getting Matt right. :) I think you did a great job. And with this kind of story, you can give him any personality you want. Trust me, fiction is the best 'cause you can make up anything. :) Can't wait for more and keep up the good work!
    August 26th, 2011 at 05:17am
  • synyster sykes

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    love it :)
    keep up the great work
    August 25th, 2011 at 10:42am
  • foREVer Synyster

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    seeems really good :)
    August 25th, 2011 at 06:23am
  • bloodyvengeance

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    Will she be nice to him or be a total bitch?
    Not to be mean or anything but if he did kill I hope he doesn't get out.
    It doesn't matter how sexy he is.
    Great update
    August 25th, 2011 at 05:33am
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