This was a truly amazing story. You are a very gifted writer. I must admit at first I was a bit skeptical since this was a fanfic but you've crafted characters with such depth it's impossible to resist growing attached to them.
Ah what a roller coaster it's been. I love the tension you've weaved into each chapter and how each turn is so perfectly timed leaving your readers on edge.
Congratulations on such an amazing story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
Anywho, I have this really strong feeling that you're going to let Matt live and Matt's going to be the father, if this is going the most predictable way. I really hope it's Brians baby though, though it feels unlikely.
OH MY GOD. I was so happy that she was giving him a chance and then..... this? He was being so sweet and I was so fucking excited that she might give him a chance but she shot Matt?
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I'm just gonna go cry in a corner and shake like a baby now.
oh the pain! oh the sadness! poor matt! he just needs someone to put him in his place, jess could be that someone! she has a place for him in her heart otherwise she would have not been so upset about shooting him. oh my god, he can't die. he just can't. i will never be the same again, my life will change if he dies. i feel so sorry for him, he has no one now. please make the baby his! he is all alone and needs someone, he can't help that he gets all dominant and angry with jess because he saw her first, tsk tsk brian. but i do like brian in this chapter though! oh my gosh. she shot him. deary me. this story just keeps getting better and better! so much drama. matt is never going to give up!
i think i almost enjoy the cats at the end of the chapters more than the chapters themselves. I get so excited to see what video you will post at the end that I have to force my self not to skip to the end to see the cute cats and kittens! cant wait for the sequel but i am hoping that in the sequel as well there will be adorable cats and kittens at the ends because you have got me addicted to your author's notes at the end of each chapter.