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  • MoMo_92

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    Yeah Zoey u r a bitch like the fact tht u r blaming Daphne for ur issues like come on dude tht seems dumb like all of a sudden u and Brian started having issues tht kinda hard to believe when u just said tht u got use to Brian spoiling u and u took it too far which means tht u guys been having issues before Daphne showed up, even tho u r a bitch and I can't stand u becuz u r annoying and rude, I hope tht u and the baby r ok becuz if u miscarried I would feel devasted, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    October 1st, 2013 at 09:24pm
  • HopelesslyIntrigued

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    I find it hard to believe that Daphne is the root of all of the problems between Zoey and Brian, and I don't believe Zoey for a minute. Wondering what's going on right now though, can't wait for more!
    October 1st, 2013 at 08:11pm
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    I don't like Zoey. Never have.
    Please update soon!!
    October 1st, 2013 at 02:22pm
  • HanerJoy

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    I'm very curious about what all of what Zoey said, and I hope she's fine and the baby too, even if she's a bitch she doesn't deserve a miscarriage. Update soon :)
    October 1st, 2013 at 07:51am
  • SarcasticNightmare

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    Okay, now I'm curious. Can't wait to read more and see what they find out, because the cramping sounds really bad. And although I dislike Zoey, miscarrying would be horrible, even for her.
    October 1st, 2013 at 04:20am
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    I am totally hooked on this story! Please update soon!
    September 11th, 2013 at 01:53am
  • Jenia

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    Oh man. This is great. Cant wait til next update!
    September 8th, 2013 at 12:20am
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    Oh shit! This is so exciting! Especially since Zoey saw Brian and Daphne! And this thing with Jared! I can't wait for another update! And yay for a sequel!! Very Happy
    September 7th, 2013 at 07:39am
  • HanerJoy

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    I knew that was gonna happen :/ I hope Matt tells everyone so they can protect her. She can't be alone. And she has to move out from there.
    September 7th, 2013 at 07:04am
  • MoMo_92

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    Well fuck me sideways, shit just got real, the fuck Daphne the least u could have done was take some of the papers so tht way u have evidence now Derek has a clean slate and u don't, and Jared is such an ass Matt should have punched him, ummmm Zoey I would say sorry but I'm not sorry so yeah can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    September 7th, 2013 at 05:10am
  • HanerJoy

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    O.O ohhh no she didn't!!!!!!! O.O :O she left Kyle when he was about to shoot his load!!!!!!! :O he's not gonna be happy at all lol and that kiss :) they need to be together and I have a feeling of why Zoe disappeared. And those calls if I were her I would say something to the guys and is she really that dumb that she does't think for a second that probably is her ex???? Update soon!!!!!
    September 6th, 2013 at 09:19pm
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    That kiss!
    They need to be together!!!
    Please update soon!
    September 6th, 2013 at 04:22pm
  • MoMo_92

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    Way to go Brian!!! Can't wait to see more update as soon as u can :)
    September 6th, 2013 at 09:33am
  • plbrinson

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    Yeah for the kiss with Brian! Lol. I so can't wait for the next update! Very Happy
    September 6th, 2013 at 07:41am
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    Brian needs to just divorce Zoey and get with Daphne! What's up with Derek? Is he still working to try and get Misty back? I just wish that Zoey was cheating on Brian and he finds out that's not his baby! Lol. This is a really great story and can't wait for update! Very Happy
    September 4th, 2013 at 07:16am
  • MoMo_92

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    Damn Brian, harsh but true *sighs* I wish they can just both admit tht there is something still there between them and stop acting like fucking high schoolers, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    September 3rd, 2013 at 07:02pm
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

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    :(
    I don't like them fighting like that.
    Please update soon!
    September 3rd, 2013 at 04:57pm
  • SarcasticNightmare

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    Kyle seems super sweet, I feel bad that she did that while sort of with him....as for Brian, he's also a hypocrite, so I don't know why he's being such an ass. I think he's just angry that he can't go after her since he can't divorce his wife who probably isn't pregnant or not pregnant with his child. I'm also very curious about her ex since he hasn't come up since the first couple of chapters, he seemed like the real threat, and she never really explained what happened with him to anyone. Can't wait to read more.
    September 2nd, 2013 at 06:32pm
  • HopelesslyIntrigued

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    I'm so torn about how I should feel... I mean, on one hand, Daphne was a bitch for using Brian, on the other, I find it completely unfair for Brian to be holding so much against her when he's still married and won't choose either way. I think Daphne kind of deserved what he did to her, but in a way he deserved what she did to him as well.
    September 2nd, 2013 at 02:50pm
  • HanerJoy

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    poor Brian and Daphne :( Kyle is a good man :) Brian is seeing what he lost, because even if he's wife is pregnant, he could have left her but be a father to the baby that I'm sure is not his. And still be with Daphne.
    September 2nd, 2013 at 05:35am