Yay!! I'm awesome person of the month yays lol I love this!! It was so sweet at the end where he promises to be there for her always. He just melts my heart! -amazing chapter I love! <3
The layout is very pretty :D All the colors seemed to match and it just looked lovely together. I like how spunky she is :) She has a lot of anger in her, which is good. Although, I noticed that you often switched between past and present tense when it wasn't necessary. That's the only error I saw, though. <3 I honestly feel really bad for her. I'd be devastated if I gave up everything for a guy, which is something I believe that no one should ever do, no matter how in love you are. She seems very strong, being able to talk to her daughter about her father (sort of) without getting snappy or teary-eyed. The end of the chapter definitely left you wondering... :) I can't wait to see what he has to say about what he's done. It would be hard to not give in to someone you love(d) so much, but then again, after six years she must have a lot of anger built up. I don't know what I'd do if I was in her situation.