AMAZING!!!!!! You did AMAZING with Draco. You didn't make him sound like a wuss, or completely out of character. You did great with it! However, I'm not happy about the end of the chapter. =[
HOW CAN YOU LEAVE IT THERE?!?!?!?!??!?!? adkhfkajsdfhkajsdfhajksdhfjkasdhfjasdlfhjasdkfh i just died. this was such a good update!!!(: please put another one up soon. I hope she doesn't die and Draco saves her
Why.......why would you end a chapter like that!? Besides that I love your story. Way too much actually haha but I still get my homework done somehow. So, please write more and more and more and more. From, Another crazy fan :D
She better not die!
Also, I think you portrayed Draco wonderfully.