Promise Me - Comments

"Ignore the fatty," Matt advised me as Jimmy stepped further into the room before finally setting me on my feet. "He turns into a hormonal bitch when he's hung-over." hahahahaha awww poor Zacky lol

Oh god I would so love to see a picture of Zacky, Matt, Jimmy and Jason squished on a couch together - that would be so cute :-)

"Maybe that's your whore brother," Zacky said to Jason. Oh god this chapter is just so so awesome

Oh god the banter between the guys is hilarious - there's so much sarcasm flowing around the room. I love it :-)

Oh dear, Delia is going to want to gut her like a fish when she finds out that she got married

This poor girl. Always feeling like she has to do right by her family, never taking a moment for herself. Man, I feel terrible for her. Being married to Brian could be a great thing! But she's too busy panicking over what her damn family will do!

I don't know how any of that legal stuff works, but it all sounded legit to me. It seemed highly believable that Matt would be the one to know the best solution, and the fans already having pictures of Brian and Abby together was a nice touch! I didn't expect it, but I suppose it was the perfect spanner to throw in the works. ;)

I still can't wait to see where you're going to go with this! And ooh, the drama that will unfold when her sisters find out! =D !

I'm so glad you updated, I was so excited about this story. :-)

LOVED IT!!! LOVED IT!! LOVED IT!!!!!

Seriously ducky. It was funny, it was heartbreaking...it was just amazing. I'm totally in love with this story!!! And I simply cannot wait for more :) x

Just got caught up with this story, and i love it! Please update it sooon!

It's my first time reading Promise Me, and I read it all in one day because I liked that much! OMG, please update soon cause I'm dying to know how they'll call off the marriage thing and her sister - I just want to slap her bitch face. ^^ Anyway, I love it and your writing skills are amazing with very detailed scenarios and everything! ;)

Ohhhhh i LOOOOOVE this. Fuck her sisters.and those other two bitches, god i wanted to jump into my phone, into the story and kick all their asses. But damn do i love this story, it's so effing genius with the details and.background and everything! !!

Please update!

Please update this soon! I'm so in love with it!

Terribly Late Comment Swap

First off, I am so so so sorry that it took me so long to actually comment on this. I'm sure you've been waiting for this forever and I feel terrible for that, but I've been so busy lately that I just couldn't (which is a bad excuse anyways, I know).

Now I guess I'll just start on the review.

I'm really liking the character development throughout this story. I can see the differences in the personalities of all of the people you introduce and that's great. And to see the progression like that is great too.

I love how you're portraying the guys. It's a little different than in a lot of other A7X stories I've read and it's certainly refreshing. I also really love how Abby didn't know about the guys before she met them. It makes for a bit of a different fanfiction, which is also really refreshing.

I really, really dislike her sisters, which seems to be a common consensus among readers. But you're tying all of that drama in to the story line really well, so it doesn't come across as just thrown in there, and that makes it so much better. And not only with just her sisters, but with all of the drama that's in this story. None of it seems like it's thrown in there as a ploy to make it "more interesting" and it all ties together really well.

Overall, I quite like this story and it sure would be interesting to see how it progresses. So good job and good luck with writing it!

Please update soon. I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter!!!

So...that took a different turn than I expected...but I'm in love with this! Update soon!

Finally found some time to read over your stuff and I’m loving this! :D Okay, I’m only now moving to the second chapter, but it doesn’t matter ^-^
I’m gonna go now and devour this story. I’ll be back later :’)

I actually thing that Brian deleting the horrible text she got from her spoil older sister was sweet! He knows how much she gets hurt each time her sisters put her down and say mean things to her. I actually think that they should stay married together because they are great together and they have this awesome chemistry with one another! I can't wait for the next update!

Gothique4 stole my words.

Oh man I can't believe her sister would just tell her "You're dead to me". That self centred piece of shit really needs a wake up call.

Oh man, I can only imagine what is going on in both their minds, apart from the raging hangovers. I wonder if the guys remember anything either?

"Name's Brian," I countered gruffly. "God's okay, too." Oh man I love this line

I still don't like her sisters they r assholes and I hope they rotten in the burning pits of hell, I wonder how Brian and the guys r goin to fix this problem, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

i love how brian is all "little purse thing" hahaa, brilliant!
awh abby is so cute and shy now she is all sober. what a mess they've gotten themselves into. i wonder what the guys are going to say? probably be annoyed that there was no bachelor party?xD haaha. i am loving the flash backs! i hope there are more, you must write more! & update again soon! its a cliche thing to get married in vegas, drunk and all, but you're not making it like that at all! compared to some other stories on here that make it cliche as eveeeeer!

Sorry for the multiple comments. -_- My net is being a bitch.

Sorry for the multiple comments. -_- My net is being a bitch.