100 Ways to Become a Groupie - Comments

you always seem to know the perfect way to end a chapter.
seriously!
THEY ARE LIKE.
FLAWLESS.
you are just amazing okay?
I love this story so much, please update soon (:

Loved the updates! :D Can't wait for more! :)

Oooo! Brilliant update!
LEARN FROM YOUR MISTAKES YO!

This. Yes, I am going to wish I can reccomend this story more than once. This story is loveable. It's funny, and well-written, but it gives good advice as well. I can't wait for the next update, I just can't.. so, UP. DATE. SOON.

I LOVE this story xD
Candy's attitude is amazing
You make this whole thing extremely believable and if I actually wanted to be a groupie this would probably help me out a lot :P
And now I know how to not freak out band members xD
Can't wait to see what advice Candy will give us next haha
And I'm slightly curious about what other rockstars she's been with... ;)

Being considered a bit of a groupie myself (I meet a LOT of rock stars, have a semi-famous band living next door, and generally get hald back after concerts because the performers want to hang out with me. Is it bad I know the venue staff by name and they know me?), I thought this was hilariou and at some parts, down right true at others.

Especially talking about looks. That's an absolute must. I have stripes dyed into my hair, and nails an inch long I paint band names/logos onto.

This is by far one of the most original stories I've ever read on Mibba.
I can't wait for the rest of the 100 ways.

This is amazing. Talk about advice lololol. Probably the most entertaining, funny, and entirely original fiction I've read in a long time! I like how much you've developed Candy--her looks, her personality and her inner self. She seemed very real throughout the entire story.

Update often! *recs/subs*

I read it, and I'm impartial to it. Sometimes it was really funny, but sometimes it was downright rude and offensive. It was entertaining, and... Different? I like how Candy isn't flawless, and by that I mean, I like the fact that Candy honestly reads like a total bitch. I also like how you took the time to humanize the rockstars, and show that they're people too. Also, I adored most the chapter titles, they were funny. ^.^

“kk lololol I will rite nowwwww. xoxoxox.”

Candy is perfect.
she has absolutely no flaws.
AND YOU ARE AN AMAZING AUTHOR!
I love how you're emphasizing the fact that rockstars are normal, too (:
please update soon!

Ohhh my goodness, I love this! I genuinely thought Candy was a real person for the first like, three chapters. But I'm blonde, so what the fuck do I know? I want to be Candy. No lie.

Brilliant update! :3

Chapters 1 - 10.

I'm really excited that I got your story for the comment swap. I have been seeing it all over Mibba, and I have wanted to read it for a while.

First of all, I adore your layout. I love the colors, and everything looks pretty and simple. I also love the chapter titles. They're all really engaging and entertaining.

I love your character's boldness. You definitely portray her a bitch in your writing. I'm guessing that is what you mean to do. She seems so full of herself. And what she says is definitely not censored.

Okay, you have seriously got me cracking up. No joke. I usually don't show much emotion when I'm reading. But your writing is amazing, and you're hilarious.

I love your characters and how all of this starts off. With Marston Jacobs. I think that was a lovely way to start her transformation.

I adore your descriptions of the different band members. Oh my gosh! The bass player sounds sexy. Now I'm almost tempted to become a groupie.

And your chapter "keep it clean." Dying. That was great. I love all the weird mottos. That chapter was the greatest I have read so far.

Things I have noticed:
In the second chapter, jailbait is spelled wrong. You spelled it jalibait.

In the second chapter, there is no space in between no and body in nobody. Same as nowhere. This mistake is in several of your chapters.

You should watch your punctuation at parts. For the most part, everything is in place. But, in some places, the punctuation should be different.

In the fourth chapter, you wrote: Someone had poured beer all of me..." I am guessing you mean to write something different?

Favorite Quote/s:
"And if mommy and daddy say no, put this shit down now; if your age is still on the clock, you're too young to be a groupie."

"Don't get too many though or you'll look like a skanky metal face who looks like they think STD's are Pokemon; you aren't supposed to catch them all, sweetie."

"Plus they're cheaper than a ten dollar whore, so you won't be out much."

"Then you'll start getting to know third cousins twice removed of the bass player of that one famous band or the brother of the merchandise guy for that other band. "

"I'm not going into details because I don't write erotica novels, but to keep things short, we fucked like rabbits."

"It's important and if you don't read it, you're screwed, blued, and tattooed."



Totally subscribing. And I will definitely be reading the rest of your story. But it just might not be right at this minute. And please don't be mad about the things I noticed. They are merely suggestions.

I like how dirty the vocabulary is. There's no mincing of words. I like that it's crude, but there's a reason for it.

I'm not such a fan of the way it's written, just 'cause I can't find a storyline. I don't really want to be a groupie, so I'm not identifying enough with Candy to want to keep following. I wish there were some examples of mistakes she made or successes she had mixed in with her advice.

Love the new layout. :D Plus, the chapters just keep getting better and better, hun. <3 Candy has morals...who would of funk it? lol Keep it coming. :)

Loving the snazzy new layout. ;D Aha.
And great job with the new update. Oh Perez... doing whatever he can to get attention and stay in the loop. -_- I love how Candy outsmarted him though. ;) Smooth.
And ooh, so she has a friend! I liked the new character introduction. Denver... I'm interested to learn more about him. :)
Can't wait for more! :D

oh goodness, that Perez, always starting trouble. ;c
CANDY IS SO NOT A HOMEWRECKER.
WHAT EVEN.
but I like how while Candy's being a total sarcastic bitch and being blunt, she's also teaching the future generation of groupies (: which is hopefully a bit more classy than the ones we have today, but who knows? they're groupies for god's sake.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Love the new layout!

Its good she has morals...to not be a homewrecker. lol

Candy never fails to entertain me! xD

I love you girly!
This chapter is incredible and I totally forgot I submitted this idea! Lady, you rule!

Sent in a couple more ideas too

I applaud Candy for not letting what others say get her down. I also really like the last line in the chapter: "Remember, haters make you famous, but the fans are the ones that truely count.". I'm excited for the next update!

This is fecking unreal love it! :D