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Hello there. xd I was brought to this interesting story of yours from comment swap. The previous comment is everything I wanted to say and I agree 100% with it. This seems very promising. I can't wait for the next chapter. Xd That's all from me, bye. Xd

Hello there. xd I was brought to this interesting story of yours from comment swap. The previous comment is everything I wanted to say and I agree 100% with it. This seems very promising. I can't wait for the next chapter. Xd That's all from me, bye. Xd

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Firstly, I want to say that I adore the layout and the simplicity of the summary. It’s short, but it instantly draws me in and I find myself wanting to know about these lyrics she never knew of. It’s also written very well.

Wow, your writing is amazing. I love the amount of description you give which is realistic but just enough so the readers aren’t overflowed with words. Although the plot line in this first chapter is quite simple, your take and the way you went with it was just intriguing to me. It’s plainly obvious you write extremely well, and I’m interested immediately by both the male and female character. Your flow is impeccable, and I can’t say I can find flaws in this, actually I can’t find any at all. My favourite line would have to be ’he was the fabled scum between her toes…’. I’m not sure why it’s my favourite but I just really, really like the way it’s written.

I’ve subbed and recc’d, hope you update soon x