The Remains Of My Wasted Youth. - Comments

And now I'm lost... I have nothing to read!!!

This was perfect!! So pleased his mum came to his senses. I didn't know whether to smile or cry. The piece he wrote for his journal was beautiful, actually really inspiring!!

You are very welcome for all the comments :) I doubt I need to tell you again how much I've loved this story and it's originality.

Really beautiful uplifting ending to a rollercoaster of a story!

Jen xx

Aaaawwwwwww...... bless Alex's mum!! This is just so perfect and I'm sure the final (nooooooooo) chapter will be too!! I may have to read it all again in one go once it's all done!!

Jen xx

I can't believe how far this story has come. I look forward to the next two chapters, you never fail to write so breathtakingly. Thank you for writing!

Not sure how it took me so long to realise this had been updated!! When Zack's dad called Alex a murderer, I wanted to hit him!! Zack's dad is such a dick! And his mum isn't much better!!

So pleased the boys are still together and happy (well as happy as can be given the circumstance!) Really can't wait to see how it all wraps up, but will be sad to see it end!

Jen xx

Holy crap! This story is so intense! BTW, the chapter titles/song choices are PERFECT. They add so much to the experience. I am very artistic and lyrics I find to be one of the best forms of expression. When words fail, music speaks. Please update soon <3

Ahhhhhh!!!!! That was amazing!!!! To be honest, that made both of the Merrick brothers seem slightly crazy and dangerous but I'm so pleased that Zack and Alex had their little cuddle at the end! Hopefully that means they still love each other and will still be together. Also hoping in the next chapter we see some of the parents reactions, I can't imagine them being too happy that their sons still want to be together!

3 chapters? :( But I still can't wait to see what they are all about!!

Thank you for writing such a brilliant story! :)
Jen xx

OMG, thank you so much!!! You are very welcome for all the support! I love this pairing any way and when they are put in such an interesting gripping plot I can't not love it!! *gives cookies*

I really hope Alex was looking around for Zack because he still wants him! It will be very interesting to see what happens when they are together again to discuss everything that happened! Can't wait for more, but I'm sad it will be over soon!!

Jen xx

Well, it looks like I guessed right.... That did not end well.

Shit.

I don't really know what to say! I was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo excited when I saw there was an update, this is currently my favourite story I'm subscribed to! And then when he started describing his Uncle Raymond I was so worried that he would say something and then he did and OMG poor Alex, and poor Zack, coz now he needs to explain everything and regain Alex's trust. But now Alex's parents will probably want to keep Zack away even more and can tell Alex why........... What have you done?!?!?

Evil cliffhanger ending! Please don't let the next update take as long! Pretty pretty please with extra cookies!! :)

Jen xx

oh my god please don't tell me that you stopped writing this story because it'a amazing and troubled Zack is adorable and it's Zalex and it's just perfect and please keep writing!!!!!!!

OMG OMG OMG!!!!! He's going to the Gaskarths' party?!?! That can't end well can it?? And the bullies..... OMG if they say something to Alex!! It has to be Zack that tells him the truth it has to!!!!

Damn, why are you such a good writer?!?! I love this! Can't wait for more,
Jen xx

OH MY GOD. I just started readingthis story today AND guess what!? ILOVETHISSTORYSOMUCHANDZALEX! I like the whole plot of this story and such it's really good! And qbdnaifbwosbqowbslqoanaaldavsl im speechless and for me thats abnormal cause usually im the one to say something random and out of the blue and im rambling....

I LOVE YOU IN THE NON-CREEPERIST WAY POSSIBLE!
And you have Matt in the story! :3
I don't believe I have any Flyzik stories sowee to say!
I love this chapter pretty pwease with a million fucking cherries on top update this story when you can? :D

I WILL GIVE YOU VIRTUALLY PUPPIES! . There he us now will you update? :)

Why do I seem to be the only one commenting?? I love this story, it's one of the three on here I get excited to see updated. I was literally thinking of it seconds before you uploaded.

Such a great, hot chapter and I can't wait for the drama. I'm afraid I don't know of any Flyzik stories, but if I do find any I'll be sure to let you know :)

Jen xx

Still loving the originality of this story and still totally hooked!!

I'm very pleased everything is cool between Zack and Alex and I really hope Alex can stay with Zack even if/(hopefully) when he finds out the truth about the past and how their families know each other.

Can't wait for the next uodate :)
Jen xx

Still loving the originality of this story and still totally hooked!!

I'm very pleased everything is cool between Zack and Alex and I really hope Alex can stay with Zack even if/(hopefully) when he finds out the truth about the past and how their families know each other.

Can't wait for the next uodate :)
Jen xx

I'm so pleased you are determined to finish this! As I said before it's so original, I can't wait to see where you take it.

Poor Zack! I get the impression he is just paranoid because of everything else that has happened to him, and he's so scared that Alex still doesn't love him that he's made himself believe it.

Great writing, can't wait for more,
Jen xx

Wow! This is so clever and original and an amazing idea written wonderfully!!!

I really hope it's Zack that he hears the truth from.

Jen xx

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N'awhhhh please tell me they approve of Zack and Alex being together!
That was an intense chapter, I was chuffed when it appeared in my mailbox :D
Cannot wait for your next update <3
~Jack's Creativity

DRAMA!

aqsdfghjkl; that was intense. I'm so anxious for the next chapter. You have no idea. And I'd DEF read a flyzik story, cause I love him too <3