September 18th, 2011 at 04:08pm
Forelsket. - Comments
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I hate that she is soooo scared!!! And John is just as sweet as ever (: I can't wait to see what happens next!!September 18th, 2011 at 03:34pm
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ahhhhhhhhhhhhh that flashback! that's so terrible, ugh.
john is still so cute, though, so that kinda made up for it.
update soon!September 18th, 2011 at 09:46am -
OMGG. I'm addicted to this!!!!:)September 18th, 2011 at 07:46am
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I really really love your story, there is not much more I can say about it hahahah. It´s just great the way you develop the thoughts she´s having and the problems she feels. I have to say, I cannot wait until she tells someone about herself and why she´s like that, it is always ana amzing part in stories that involve some sort of abuse. Kinda like in the superhero movies, the best part is always the first time the guy is a hero in front of the whole city. Hahaha weird analogy, I know, but it´s the way I could describe it. I really love the realism of your writing, like you know what you write and you developed the character so well that you get every single bit right, like the way she literally cant help but think the way she does and get creeped out by everything and everyone, it makes it real because a person with a trauma like hers would definitely react that way. You are doing a great job.September 18th, 2011 at 06:46am
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Ah, this story is wonderful. I can understand why she is so cautious and nervous around everyone- I mean who wouldn't be if they were in her situation? Anyway, I'm seriously disliking her sister a lot. Like, really? Go away. Update soon!!! :)September 18th, 2011 at 04:38am
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The peeing story is the greatest lol. I can't wait for more to happen between John and Annaliese.September 17th, 2011 at 04:52am
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I think I´m gonna really like this stroy, though the Grandpa thing creeps me out. I could never picture a Grandfather doing something like that, though you do put him quite young, both my Grandparents are 86 and I think this one is about sixty-something. I really wish she warms up to John quick, I really feel like reading a good love story.
On another subject, I´m really sorry for what´s happening in your family, whatever it is, it must be really hard for you. I hope everything works out okay.September 17th, 2011 at 01:12am -
Awww! He is too cute.
I'm glad she's warming up to their group of friends.
I think if she tells someone it'll either be John or JaredSeptember 14th, 2011 at 10:52am -
I love the ending :3 soo cute!September 14th, 2011 at 06:14am
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diggin the new layout.
Gotta love John.
I can't wait for more! :)September 14th, 2011 at 04:59am -
HAHAH YES, JOHN PEEING HIMSELF. I laughed so hard when I first watched the video where he talks about that.
I love how she's awkward, okay, and it gave me joy when she actually laughed. Come on, who wouldn't at the chance of scaring someone? I'm still laughing now. Highlight of the chapter, that's all I can say. Keep up the good work! :DSeptember 14th, 2011 at 04:37am -
i hate how she's so awkward, it reminds me of me! but she's less social due to the whole grandpa thing, yea. but i do love this, and hope you update a different story soon 'cough cough all in' (;September 14th, 2011 at 04:10am
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I love this story, it's completely different from anything I've ever read on here. You're taking a legitimate issue and calling attention to it but not too much attention where the story is too disgusting to read. I'm hoping John can help fix her although I'm sure it'll be a long road ahead for the both of them.September 14th, 2011 at 02:57am
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I love this.
Please update soon.September 12th, 2011 at 09:30am -
I love this story, I can't wait to find out what happens and how the story progresses. Its off to such a great start right now!September 12th, 2011 at 06:26am
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Yay the next part has John :) I can't wait to see what happens!! :)September 12th, 2011 at 02:21am
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eeeeee, can't wait for John in the next chapter :)September 12th, 2011 at 02:06am
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I wanna see how this turns out :---)September 12th, 2011 at 01:32am
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Ah! I'm so excited for more of this!
I just want the whole story to be written because I have no idea how everything will play out!September 12th, 2011 at 01:09am
I think it's cute how she's already kind of putting her trust in John.
Update soon!!