I Wish That I Could Fly, Like a Bird So High - Comments

  • shortygirl

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    I love that song, yet there are bad memories with that song so i always end up crying

    I just don't get why she doesn't tell them.....they wanna help
    November 19th, 2011 at 01:35am
  • graceful swans;

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    I really like how you write. :)
    November 19th, 2011 at 01:33am
  • SynysterVengeance13

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    I love the idea of the story and I can't wait for more
    November 15th, 2011 at 06:22pm
  • jesus-was-a-zombie

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    "Olivia, you know if there is something going on you can talk to any of this."
    "This" should be "us," I think.

    I like the new layout :)
    Can't wait for more.
    November 14th, 2011 at 01:08am
  • shortygirl

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    its nice to see the caring side of Brian
    November 14th, 2011 at 12:59am
  • Through-the-Night

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    Damn, what is going on with all these teachers? Oh well, it just makes for more drama :)
    November 14th, 2011 at 12:53am
  • PurifiedToxicity

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    I love this story, sooo stoked for the next update. This story intrigues me(:
    November 12th, 2011 at 05:42am
  • jessicajackdaw

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    arghhhhh so good, i'm really excited for the next chapter, you always leave me wanting more haha!
    November 10th, 2011 at 05:36pm
  • MusicMakesMeLove

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    This is such a gewd story :D
    November 10th, 2011 at 02:21am
  • shortygirl

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    I like this story
    November 9th, 2011 at 05:07am
  • jesus-was-a-zombie

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    Aw, poor Olivia...
    November 9th, 2011 at 02:29am
  • heyit'sjordan_

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    I really love this, please update soon?(:
    November 9th, 2011 at 01:14am
  • jessicajackdaw

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    ahhhh so excited for the next chapter
    this story is srsly brill :)))
    November 7th, 2011 at 11:27pm
  • caitlinstarz

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    I adore this story! It's so interesting and not like any I've read before
    October 25th, 2011 at 06:16pm
  • yellowjellybean14

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    not too crazy about the olivia and anna situation but maybe it will grow on me. please update again as soon as possible.
    October 24th, 2011 at 03:42am
  • Through-the-Night

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    Oh! Also, could you get a picture of Anna up?

    I feel like she'll become really important in this.

    Also, I think one of the guys should help her wrap her bleeding feet up (ow - that's why I never wanted to be a ballerina). Probably Matt or Johnny.

    And will Olivia and Brian's relationship ever improve...at all? I mean, wow.

    Also, I can't wait until the other teens play a bigger role in this. I'm excited to read about Benji and Landon <3
    October 24th, 2011 at 01:05am
  • Through-the-Night

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    This keeps getting more and more interesting :D

    Update soon please
    October 24th, 2011 at 12:54am
  • graceful swans;

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    :C poor Olivia.
    October 24th, 2011 at 12:44am
  • DizzyFromSpinning

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    Your story is great. Keep writing! xD
    October 21st, 2011 at 12:08pm
  • jesus-was-a-zombie

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    Oh, my. Poor Olivia...

    Oh, and.. I absolutely love this story.
    October 21st, 2011 at 09:22am