You Suck at Love - Comments

@ Much Ado About Me
Thank you for your comment :) It's very helpful - I didn't know that this as a good intro. I'll keep this in mind for future stories.

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First chapter is very good. You allow time to introduce your character and tell us how and what he feels and things without making him sound wimpy or a common lazily picked character decisions. I'm off to the second chapter

I love this :) Gosh, I'm so worked up T.T what's going to happen with Elric? I really hope he, like, gets hit by a truck or something because he's awful and needs to just go away XP
Anyway, I'm soo looking forward to reading the next chapter, so update when you can and congratz on graduating! (sorry if I'm a bit late on that...)

OkayOkayOkay. I'm normally the silent reader. REad stuff on here. Don't comment. Nothing. But if this doesn't get finished like others I've read....I'll die. Seriously. This. I love it. It's so cute, Yet it makes me cry for I'm stuck in a girls body and I will never have something like Jonah and Jude...All guy ish..but cuteeee.
Okaythen. Like I said..I will die...Don't let me die.
K.

I honestly cannot lie. Upon receiving this story in the Comment Swap, I was 'eh' and for a very good reason. As good as this story is, it's just not my genre that I enjoy reading. That is nothing personal to you, I promise. You tell a very good story. I'm just not one to read these stories.

But I will give it to you. This story is very good plot wise. It's got that bit of feel to it that makes the readers want to know what's going on and what's going to come of everything.
You had a few mistakes generally. Try breaking up things into separate paragraphs, especially your dialogue which you have mashed up in multiple places. I also noticed that sometimes, you tag your dialogue incorrectly; to help with this, try reading this or this. Both are incredibly helpful.

Other than that, this is really good. Great job, and good luck in your future chapters. (:

on chapter 2 so far... omg so far so good :D

I actually liked that chapter. Minus Mr. Elric kissing Jonah and just showing up in the first place. I loved Jude and Jonah's conversation during the whole ordeal. I hope Mr. Elric will just hurry up and leave.

! Can't wait for the next update!

Please update sooner! I love your characters and their personalities. Your writing is amazing!

date date date!!!! Oh Jonah haha
Update asap

Gwen is awesome. Can't wait for the next one!

The Legend of Korra!!!!!~~~~~Wooo!

I love Gwen. Heh
But I hate drama and I'm kinda worried about the next chapter.

:D
I sense Elric coming soon!
Great job!

:D Awesome~

oh and as for the three way id have to say gewn, jude, and either dahlia or jonah

you need to update asap! ahh jonah he seems like such a sweet heart:)

Ach. This story is stressful. And emotionally draing. Poor little Jonah. D:

Poor Jonah :(

Mr. Elric better not hurt Jonah. >:(

And some of the sentences are missing words.

yay :D you updated <3