WOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! I just got back from a trip, and you updated!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!! Anywayz, I hope they get there in time...and I hope they believe him. Smart thinking of Ray to throw it into the fire......if anyone had found that, it would have been a disaster.....0.0 Gee and Frank are so cute....//_^ I lovez this story =) I can't wait for more!!! twloha
Hmmm....I really am starting to love this story, it didn't TOTALLY catch me right away, but I knew something special would be in this story, so I am deciding to follow it until the end ^^
Be careful with spelling errors and some grammar errors...umm...thats all the critique I have for you ^^
Awesome fucking possum dude, keep up the good work! By the way, I shall subscribe to your story, just because I love it and all that wondeful Jazz lolz
Wow.....poor Ray.....I was scared, I thought it was the rest of the Caster Clan out to get them....but how the hell did Ray find them????? 'Cause if Ray can find them, then the resta his clan can find them, too....0.0 But, they need to get their asses in gear and get the other clan the HELL out of there!!!!! twloha
I loved the ending. It was very cliche, like out of an old horror movie, but you just couldn't help but liking it. The power goes out; a bad omen. Then the doorbell rings. It still has the effect, even after we've heard of it before, of being creepy. Nice little "scene" with the pictures, btw. I'd love to see those pictures.
I've been reading this story for a while, I just haven't commented, the stupid ass that I am XP Gerard and Frank...vampires...this is fuckin awesome //_^ Poor Mikey can't see in the dark... But, I'm scared now. Who the hell is at the door??? 0.0 This story is awesomeness, the POV is perfect, and the way you write it is amazing, too. I just love it all //_^ twloha