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  • crazy.beautiful

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    for some reason i have a huge grin on my face after reading this chapter...it was light and after the last line in the chapter about having to save the world, i think they could do with some lightness to their lives....i loved it!
    June 29th, 2008 at 06:34am
  • CharredRemains

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    I am so glad you all like this story :) Thank you for so much support and comments! If you like this also read my other story : Fairy Dust and perhaps even Illustrations! :) Thank you again faithful readers! Keep up the awsome comments and Il keep up the updates! -Andrea
    June 29th, 2008 at 06:15am
  • paranormality.

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    Wow, this story's really good! I subscribed :)
    June 29th, 2008 at 03:47am
  • laurawr376

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    OH. MY. GOTH.
    i love your storyy!! i had to read all of it before i could comment. if it was a published book i would never put it down entill i finished it [ just like the vampire kisses seires :D (whitch you might like btw) there addictive!!]
    if you dont update soon.
    i will die of lack of frerard/vampires.

    obsessed mutch?!

    i like how you call gerard you. as if hes writing to him, or telling him the story but every now and then im like ME?! ohh lol
    love it!

    lau xo♥
    June 29th, 2008 at 02:13am
  • crazy.beautiful

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    wow, that was amazing, i loved that last moment, where frank feels complete with gerard, that made me melt.....this story is just made of pure awesome and i love reading it...though i seem to suck at commenting and keeping up on it....more soon please?!
    June 28th, 2008 at 03:24am
  • Protest My Love

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    NOOOOOOO! NOT BJ! NOOOOO!
    June 18th, 2008 at 08:10pm
  • Devy! Sullivan

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    I totally subcribed it is really good..your really good at writing!!!!!
    June 17th, 2008 at 11:15pm
  • MidnightMassacre ;;

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    Wow..this is just..wow!
    I love it.
    Please update soon.
    I can't wait for more!!
    <3
    I also am a new reader and I just subscribed!! :D
    June 15th, 2008 at 03:14am
  • crazy.beautiful

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    wow so my mind totally just thought of something but i don't want to say, i'll just wait it out....

    can't wait for more!! seriously! =]
    June 10th, 2008 at 06:34am
  • Battery Baby.

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    um... the spelling is a bit annoying, but I'm reading it anyway. It's pretty good :]
    June 10th, 2008 at 04:55am
  • Frankie-

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    o.O I ... Need ... More ... ! ... I need to feed ... My addiction to this story! ... please update soon!
    May 20th, 2008 at 01:13am
  • The Anthem

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    Richard will rise!
    Muahaha.
    Amazing udpate.
    LoVE
    May 17th, 2008 at 11:48pm
  • Beast In Repose

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    hey. this story is like...wow! black nails. sweet. please update!
    May 16th, 2008 at 10:14am
  • CharredRemains

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    Sorry, I was in a rush : /
    May 16th, 2008 at 04:02am
  • Protest My Love

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    interesting and fun. i'm definitely subscribing.

    the only problems i find are:
    > gobbledy-gook. your ideas are slightly jumbled and confuse the reader a bit.
    > random typos.
    > too fast of a pace.

    other than that, it's a wonderful idea. :)
    May 16th, 2008 at 03:24am
  • crazy.beautiful

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    hmm....yeah that confused the hell out of me....but it's alright, i'm sure all will make sense here shortly.
    May 16th, 2008 at 02:05am
  • crazy.beautiful

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    yeah, i'm with frank, i've got a funny feeling about that happening...i really do...
    May 15th, 2008 at 06:34am
  • go_girl

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    COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    JUST DON'T GET TOO CLOSE TO THE DOGS!
    Write more soon!
    May 14th, 2008 at 08:47pm
  • Frankie-

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    *jaw drops* I

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    Nothing more I can say...
    May 14th, 2008 at 07:35pm
  • crazy.beautiful

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    wow, i have a feeling the dogs are going to give away our boys' little secret...

    which could only lead to chaos....or i could be wrong an they're just there to intimidate everyone...which seems to have worked on gerard...

    can't wait for more!
    May 14th, 2008 at 05:49pm