After He Unlocked the Door - Comments

that was amazing.
i loved it.

You're brilliant, Dru.
I've got goosebumps.
Everything fit so perfectly together. The songs, the layout and the story.
It did make it more.

It was strange to see Ryan's character the one in control. You'd think that would be Pete.
I like how you made it work.

Like stellastarr said, Ryan wasn't the bad guy. Not really.
I thought it seemed like he was, until the end.
I see it as him desperately trying to hold onto Brendon.

I think my favourite part of this was your portrayal of Pete.
I can't put in words how his character made me feel.

stellastarr:

My friend actually looked at this story and she asked me to explain it to her since it's so...you know, sad.
I told her that Ryan wanted to protect his and Brendon's relationship from crashing so he had to nip the problem while it wasn't ready yet. She thought that Ryan was the bad guy in this story, but I told her no one was.
So my comment is this:
This is an actually sad, but enlighting story. I love the details and the songs you have that go with the story.

You did a good job explaining it. :D
And thank you<333

My friend actually looked at this story and she asked me to explain it to her since it's so...you know, sad.
I told her that Ryan wanted to protect his and Brendon's relationship from crashing so he had to nip the problem while it wasn't ready yet. She thought that Ryan was the bad guy in this story, but I told her no one was.
So my comment is this:
This is an actually sad, but enlighting story. I love the details and the songs you have that go with the story.

wow....

oMfG mOr3 s0oN!!?? =DD
i rLy lyked da storie lmAo
but i dun gedditt???
dey rnt gaayy.

New story.
Almost 6700 words.
Pete/Ryan. Pete/Patrick. Ryan/Brendon.
Inspired by G.I.N.A.S.F.S.
NC-17.

Happy [?] reading!

xoxox
-Dru