The Dark Details - Comments

This is a really creative idea. I really enjoy the fact that you have created what will happen when Peter is forced to grow up.

Oh my, I can't tell you how much I miss your stories. Especially this one, because Peter Pan--asdfghjkl; unf.

MORE. :))

Wondering why there isn't like about 4 pages worth of comments asking for more. Peter Pan is an epic story and to write it like this is even more awesome. Picking Alex as Peter was an excellent choice. The details given in the summary and the prelude are perfect. The banner is amazing and wondering who made it. Please for the love of trust, faith, and pixie dust: UPDATE THIS STORY! Subscribing too.

This story sounds truly amazing. I don't know if I've ever heard of a plot this good.

This story sounds amazing, I'm a huge sucker for peter pan!

The layout to this is freaking amazing. The summary is so enthralling. I was captivated by the entire thing as soon as the page loaded. Freaking unbelievable. I subscribed before I even read chapter one.

Usually I don't like Prologues, but I enjoyed reading this one. It's better than any I have read. I can't wait for chapter one. I know this is going to be incredible. I want to know the secret of staying young forever.

The summary. Wow. I am amazed. It drew me in. My eyes were seriously glued to my computer screen. I really hope you post more, because this sounds like a fantastic plot.

"the last remaining tendrils of our existence"

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The prologue is great. Peter Pan is such an interesting character, and you're being so creative with this! Some fairy tale related stories aren't good because the writers don't have imagination. They don't get creative. I can tell you're going to do that with this! I want to know more. So you better update soon!

This was amazing and very different than all the other stuff here on mibba. I LOVE it! I know this is gonna be awesome! Update soon k (:

I have been so fucking excited to read this and oh my god it's absolutely amazing. I cannot wait for more on this (:

Peter Pan has always been my absolute favorite Disney classic, ever since I was a little girl. So much so, that what we went to Disney World I cried because I didn't get to see him so my dad had to go out looking for him and I got this long, lovely note from him <3

I only had to read the first line to know: I'm subscribing. I love seeing Peter Pan related fanfiction, and this has just become my top-read-priority. <3

I like the idea of Peter being sent out of his own world, and into ours and growing up. And then, having to take bak Neverland. I'm curious to see where you're going to take this; whether it'll end up being a cutsey love story with the girl, or maybe someone will die, or who knows? But you definitely caught my interest. <3

I hope you write this soon!!

So, the summary is amazing, I think it could be a prologue though if you are planning to go into detail about how he searches for her and how he was thrown out. Yeah, if you plan on going into detail then the summary might give too much away and your readers might think it were repetitive.

A layout would definitely draw more people in as well. I'm subscribing to this because it sounds epic. (:

Man, I LOVE Peter Pan, and this sounds awesome! Can't wait until you start posting. :D

I don't know why this doesn't have comments, it sounds fantastic. Moreeeee. Please.