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  • Cherry Road

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    :shock: :shock: :shock:

    There's only one 'f' in mafia, by the way. ;D

    I don't...really know what to say now.
    Poor Gerard though, getting caught up in all of this for nothing.

    Sorry for such a shitty comment.
    =\

    <3
    March 9th, 2008 at 07:08pm
  • Harmony77uk

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    0_0

    Lets hope its someone who can help...
    March 9th, 2008 at 01:52pm
  • Virus

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    WoW Poor Frankie.
    March 9th, 2008 at 04:11am
  • Cherry Road

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    Oh, dude.
    That fucking rocks.

    First of all, who the hell are these buffoons and what do they have to do with Frank?
    Poor guy.
    I just wanna hug him or something.
    xD

    But I want to know how Frank met these guys in the first place. And who's at the door. :tehe:

    One spelling error: "Here's my address, drop by whenever you want," I said, handing the paper to Mikey."
    Simple spelling mistake. There are two "d" 's in the word address. =]

    <3
    March 9th, 2008 at 03:30am
  • Pocky_Panda

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    I BET ITS GEE!!!!

    UPDATE SOON PLZ!!!! :D
    March 9th, 2008 at 01:28am
  • My Chemical Romance.

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    I randomly came across this just now, and I'm hooked.

    I've spent the last few hours reading a terribly intricate and over-phrased novel,
    So reading this was a complete breath of fresh air, hahaha :mrgreen:

    I fell in love with the storyline completely. I've never read a story like this before.
    And, gah, "Vranck." I shouldn't find it funny, 'cause he's deaf and all
    But it's just so adorable and cute and sfjhdsjkgds amazing.

    I look forward to more, keep it up :]]]]

    In Love
    March 9th, 2008 at 01:26am
  • rockstarDIVA

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    i love this so much you have no idea, update soon!
    March 9th, 2008 at 12:33am
  • crazy.beautiful

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    i love the twists you keep putting in this story....they keep me intrigued to the point where i'm rather impatient for the next update...like this one! =]
    March 8th, 2008 at 11:40pm
  • Virus

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    New reader:) Awesome story and pretty original!
    March 8th, 2008 at 03:39pm
  • omg ur so straight!

    omg ur so straight! (100)

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    i love this story!
    i tred to learn sign but i always mixed the letters up, it was soo confusing
    March 7th, 2008 at 10:05pm
  • grandma eater.

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    awhh how cute In Love They're teaching him sign language :tehe:

    What? what? what? Meeting? With whom? : O
    March 7th, 2008 at 08:26pm
  • Harmony77uk

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    I used to sign but gave up cos I sucked!!
    Update killer now, lol... I love trhis but I love that too, haha
    March 7th, 2008 at 01:22pm
  • crazy.beautiful

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    i love the connection you're building between gerard and frank and frank and mikey and giving the insight to the relationship mikey and gerard have....though now i'm intrigued to know what else was behind gerard's 'thank you'...flaws and all, i think this story is amazing, it's a story i get excited to see updated! can't wait for more!
    March 7th, 2008 at 06:51am
  • Cherry Road

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    Very, very good.
    I'm glad they're teaching Frank all the hand signs. :D

    A couple mistakes that I caught:
    "I'lllearn teach you how to spell, first. Talking will go way slower than it would with words, but the alphabet is easier to learn," Mikey explained, putting his fist in the air, the palm turned to me as his thumb stayed next to his fingers instead of clamped underneath them. "This is an A."
    Learn is the act of gaining knowledge, while teach is the act of giving knowledge to someone or something else. In this case, since Mikey is giving knowledge to Frank, it would be teach. =]
    And the same goes for the next couple chapters when you used learn instead of teach.

    We continued the alphabet, having our hands point with either one or two fingers, make an 'picobello', create the 'loser' sign without putting it to your forehead, sticking out thumb between our fisted index and middle finger.
    Simple, really - because picobello does not start with a vowel, it doesn't need the extra 'n' at the end. It only needs the letter 'a'. =]

    I hope you don't mind me pointing things out like this when I see them, I just like to give the author more feedback than just telling you that this is awesome.
    :mrgreen: Because even though this is a damn original story and I love it, every author deserves to know their flaws.

    <3
    March 6th, 2008 at 10:56pm
  • rockstarDIVA

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    this is wonderful, its my favorite. cant wait for more =] i think they should kiss to learn words more often :D
    March 6th, 2008 at 10:27pm
  • Psyche Adrenaline

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    I'll say, you've got guts.
    I started a story with a deaf person in it, but it got too much for me. I got really frustrated.

    You're doing a great job, and this story is amazing.

    More when you can, please. In Love
    March 6th, 2008 at 10:22pm
  • whiterabbits

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    Hiya, I just wanted to say this is an awesome and grandly original fic! I'm loving it -but please hurry and post more chapters! I hate waiting when the story is so good!! Thankz! <333
    March 6th, 2008 at 06:37pm
  • Harmony77uk

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    Holy shit dudette!! I go into hospital for 3 days and you do 3 chapters!!

    So, yeah, anyway... cool and cute so far, good job :)

    (Right, my comments are a bit shite right now)
    March 6th, 2008 at 04:38pm
  • rockstarDIVA

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    this is soo cute! It's my favorite by far. Please more?
    March 6th, 2008 at 04:27am
  • Cherry Road

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    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. :tehe:
    Even though Gerard always draws Frank, this one was sweet.
    :D

    And the last line was spectacular.
    I wonder if/how it's going to come into play in the next chapter.

    <3
    March 6th, 2008 at 01:39am