To the End - Comments

Love it!!

I absolutely adored the last update! It was amazing to read, you wrote that scene incredibly well. John is incredibly sweet towards Emma :)

Hi, frmo comment swap. And honestly, i would enjoy this if it were a different type of story or different person. I don't really like John, but this story is well written. I like it, keep going :D it would be the best from what I see from the other comments.

Awwww awkward first time sex. At least we know where John Ohh came from ;)

lol so cute XD... eeeppp!!!

loving this story already :]

I'm falling in love with Emma and John's relationship, I'm so glad you updated so soon!

As soon as I saw the word "God" I went to my iTunes and immediately started playing Growing Up. I called it ahahaha. I love this. And John is 18 so we can assume he's started to have his mullet hair :3

fsldkfj finally! can't wait to see what comes next!!

* Comment Swap bROught mehere *

all I have to say to this is OWOWW! you have some great talent, and you are using it in a great way. *Recommended* I love the lay out a lot though, its is so girly and helps keep me intrestd in the thr story. Sorry eyes are half clsed as type thins so....

OH MY GOD IT'S FUDGING BRILLIANT! I wanna read more! Please write more?! Please :( Quick, I'm subscribing right now, and I'm recommending, I'm so glad Comment Swap brought me to this story! I only have one problem: please remove the 'h' in 'John shits her in his lap so her' it made me laugh because I'm THAT childish!

cute story i enjoy the intimacy between John and Rosie, very refreshing. I wish your chapters were longer though. Cute read

Unf, this is so, so cool. I absolutely love this, it's adorable! John as a kid, awh, i just wanna grab him and squeeze the life outta him! Emma seems like a bit of a bitch but yeah, she's 5 sooo.. anyway, g0od job, and update soooooon!<3

Oh my god, I love this Fanfiction loads! Even though I have a single clue who John O'Callaghan was up until now, I may be obsessed with this fanfic:') I'm subscribing, so Pleeeeeeeeease update soon! Seriously, keep up the awesome work! Cause as long as you do, I’ll carry on loving it! X)

Aww :-) i love how shy john is about his crush!

This is awesome! Such a unique and interesting storyline! Can't wait for an update!

Awwww Johnnnn :) I love Tim and Jared giving him shit for liking her. I mostly hang with my guy friends and they do the same thing. To me and each other.

Laaaaawd have mercy. Love this, love John.

Oh Lord, please update this again tonight. I can't wait to see what happens with sixteen-year-old John and Emma! :D

another brilliant chapter, can't wait for the next!