AWWWW, I thought there was going to be a kiss T_T But it was a lovely chapter. I really feel for Ash- that boy is too cute. And Slater is just... *swoon* I really want him to realise his feelings for Ash. I KNOW HE HAS FEELINGS haha But yes, please update soon! This is an amazing story! xx
:) I absolutely adore this story! THe beginning is a bit unclear, but as soon as he starts running away, it gets so real and interesting. I love Slater for being that amazing rock that keeps Ash steady. I love Ash too, but I hate that he doesn't listen to his instincts. Slater is so hard to read, it charming hahaha. I really really enjoy this and I hope you continue and update soon. :)
Oh God, Slater's such a sweetheart (he is! He just doesn't know that) *^-^* I love him so much! Ow, I want to f***ing kill Jason, that motherfucker! Poor Ash :'{ Loved the update, this story makes me really happy :D <3
Jason has it coming for him. He'd better sleep with one eye open, since I'm coming for him... *creeper face* But that was a great chapter! I love Slater, and... THEY HUGGED :] So yay! That made my day! And I'm glad you're continuing with this story- I never want it to end! xx
Whoever reported this story is crazy. Some stories coincidently have the same ideas, but are written differently. I'm sure it's just a coincidence and the plot isn't even entirely the same.
Great chapter anyways, I love Ashley's relationship with the customers.
OKAY, firstly... DO NOT TAKE IT DOWN *uses body to shield story* I love this too much for you to throw away. It's so darn good, I am addicted. Secondly, *gets rocket launcher out* WHO REPORTED YOU? I'M GONNA GO AIRUHELIURHIE. And Slater soooo likes him he he I love Slater, so mysterious yet adorable at the same time! Please update soon, or at least keep this story going. It is a treasure, and who ever reported you for plagiarism is clearly out of their minds :] xx
I hope everything works out! I was reported for plagiarism once and the other author was so horrible about it. I ended up having to take the story down. I hope that doesn't happen here. I love this story!!!!! It's one of my favorites of yours!