The Diner - Comments

  • imagine.

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    I just started reading this and its so cute! :)
    March 22nd, 2012 at 11:33am
  • A T T A C K !

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    AWWWW, I thought there was going to be a kiss T_T
    But it was a lovely chapter. I really feel for Ash- that boy is too cute.
    And Slater is just... *swoon* I really want him to realise his feelings for Ash. I KNOW HE HAS FEELINGS haha
    But yes, please update soon! This is an amazing story!
    xx
    March 22nd, 2012 at 06:23am
  • Flying Flawed

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    This one made me cry, don't really know why but it really got to me. I love the way you write. Keep it up!
    March 22nd, 2012 at 12:58am
  • kiikyta

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    xD This is my favorite story :D
    March 21st, 2012 at 10:47pm
  • Snowfall Melody

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    Oh and also, I find myself imagining Slater with a U.S. Southern accent, even though I know this isn't in the U.S. I really like his character
    March 21st, 2012 at 10:34pm
  • Snowfall Melody

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    :) I absolutely adore this story! THe beginning is a bit unclear, but as soon as he starts running away, it gets so real and interesting. I love Slater for being that amazing rock that keeps Ash steady. I love Ash too, but I hate that he doesn't listen to his instincts. Slater is so hard to read, it charming hahaha. I really really enjoy this and I hope you continue and update soon. :)
    March 21st, 2012 at 10:31pm
  • No Tomorrow

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    Oh Ashley :(
    I just want to give him a big hug!
    But I'm glad Slater was there to give him a hug instead =]
    Can't wait for the next update!
    March 21st, 2012 at 06:05pm
  • Gates of Delirium

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    Okay I already miss this story and it wasn't updated for what...a few day? xD anyways, update soon please!
    March 21st, 2012 at 05:06pm
  • silent bones ;

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    Oh God, Slater's such a sweetheart (he is! He just doesn't know that) *^-^* I love him so much!
    Ow, I want to f***ing kill Jason, that motherfucker! Poor Ash :'{
    Loved the update, this story makes me really happy :D <3
    March 19th, 2012 at 10:38pm
  • Bolts;;

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    Poor Ashley. =/ That ending made me smile. I'm glad that he decided to go to Slater's house instead.
    March 18th, 2012 at 03:47pm
  • SuperNovaEclipse

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    Atleast there huggin by the end. Poor lil Ashley tho!!!
    March 18th, 2012 at 07:11am
  • yurio

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    Stupid Jason.
    Poor Ashley.
    Why'd he have to go?
    I loved the update.
    March 18th, 2012 at 05:00am
  • A T T A C K !

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    Jason has it coming for him. He'd better sleep with one eye open, since I'm coming for him... *creeper face*
    But that was a great chapter! I love Slater, and... THEY HUGGED :] So yay! That made my day!
    And I'm glad you're continuing with this story- I never want it to end!
    xx
    March 18th, 2012 at 01:59am
  • samitize

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    I want o kill Jason!!!>:( how dare he! But yay for continuing this story! I love it<33
    March 18th, 2012 at 01:11am
  • stamfordbridge

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    Love the story! Please update soon
    March 18th, 2012 at 12:10am
  • yurio

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    Whoever reported this story is crazy. Some stories coincidently have the same ideas, but are written differently. I'm sure it's just a coincidence and the plot isn't even entirely the same.

    Great chapter anyways, I love Ashley's relationship with the customers.
    March 17th, 2012 at 05:48pm
  • Niall James Horan

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    This is amazing and UNIQUE!
    So whoever said that this was plagiarism
    Has some screws loose
    So yeah, this is amazing and I hope to
    Read more.
    :)
    March 16th, 2012 at 12:28pm
  • A T T A C K !

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    OKAY, firstly... DO NOT TAKE IT DOWN *uses body to shield story* I love this too much for you to throw away. It's so darn good, I am addicted.
    Secondly, *gets rocket launcher out* WHO REPORTED YOU? I'M GONNA GO AIRUHELIURHIE.
    And Slater soooo likes him he he I love Slater, so mysterious yet adorable at the same time!
    Please update soon, or at least keep this story going. It is a treasure, and who ever reported you for plagiarism is clearly out of their minds :]
    xx
    March 16th, 2012 at 08:42am
  • PillPopper

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    you can't take it down.. i love this story to bits!
    March 16th, 2012 at 05:13am
  • Flying Flawed

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    I hope everything works out! I was reported for plagiarism once and the other author was so horrible about it. I ended up having to take the story down. I hope that doesn't happen here. I love this story!!!!! It's one of my favorites of yours!
    March 16th, 2012 at 01:55am