Oh! and so so so so so so so so so so so sorry that theses chapters in my story are short (they look much longer writing them on my Ipod) anyway Im gonna get better I promise,Catch you guys later.BYE!!!
Eheh... *tilts head* I'm a bit confuzzled.... ^____^ It seems like these chapters are just previews of their true content. They're really well written and all, but they're just really short, and leap across scenes... Also, I'd suggest adding some identification of whose POV it's from, to knock down at least some of the confusion... Subscribing anyways ;D