Holy shit. That was intense! I dont think John killed her but I could be absolutely wrong.. I hope he didn't anyways Ily for this 15 comment update thing!!!
WOAH that is some hardcore shit! Seriously, the thing that happened with John was so crazy, really. And Amanda's going crazy, I kinda feel sorry for her! I'm so glad you're rolling with updates!
Holy fucking wow. I think the reason we all like this story so much is it's pure intensity. In other fan fictions the intensity comes from the love story and someone cheats. This story is a lot more than that. Can't wait for the next one.
Holy fucking wow. I think the reason we all like this story so much is it's pure intensity. In other fan fictions the intensity comes from the love story and some
NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! I hate you!!!!! My heart is so fucking broken!!!!! I don't know if I wanna read this anymore :'(
Oh, god, please don't let it be John! hahahaha
I feel like a 15 year old girl right this moment! Thanks for such a nice work! :) I so don't hate you! I'm gonna stick with you through all your stories because they are fantastic!!!!! <3
Fuck. Shit just gets more complicated as it goes on. I can't fucking wait to find out what happens next and what really happened to Erika. And if Amanda and Kennedy are actually related. You know, they could just do a paternity test and end that guessing. I hope they do. And I hope John didn't kill Erika and that Amanda and John get back together. Does it count if I comment 15 times? I really wanna know what happens.
i'm commenting so much because i really want the next chapter! omg the whole john thing threw me for a loop this story is so good i can't believe it almost over! update very very soon please!
O_o oh my god. That chapter was, well, wow. No words can describe it! Awh, John! :( I feel so bad for him, though my thoughts for both of them are all over the place! Eeek, she seems so messed up, poor girl! I honestly thought he was going to smash down the door, jeeze he's pretty miffed off, though who could blame him. The girl he loves just had him arrested. I BLAME AUSTIN FOR THAT. Stupid douche. He just had to go and tell herr that. What an absolute idiot. Seriously. I could hit him. John really cares for her, and she really cares for him. Ah man. They can't hate each other! I don't want John going to jail either! I think i might cry! :'( Please update asap! I am in dying need for the next chapter! <3
I was not expecting that curveball. Can't wait for the next chapter though :) Also, not to be mean but in the first few sentences of the story you accidentally wrote Josh instead of John. Josh franceschi