Fire That Burns but Never Dies - Comments

i love this so much, i knew it i knew it'd be ghost. I kind of hope that her little romance with Brian grows as this whole thing evolves. that'd make me so happy. you don't even know. I can't wait for more.

I'm not normally one to comment, but I adore this story. It's atypical from most of the Avenged stories I've found, and your characters are better developed. I love the ghost aspect! Can't wait for the next installment. :)

this is wicked awesome so far!
*subscribes*

Loved it! Can't wait for more freaky things to start happening!
Your doggy is a cutie! How was your Halloween?

seriously, this was the perfect Halloween chapter, haha! As always, I loved it.

I kind of found it hilarious that Brian reacted the way he did when she told him about what happened. But I wouldn't have been thrilled in the slightest about living in a haunted house. And I'm glad they made up. Can't wait for an update! Zacky's cute in his skeleton costume by the way.

Aw, well, I'm glad they are okay again.

Your dog is so cute.
:]

I really wonder what Kelly would say if she found out things were happening to Reese. I wonder if she would think her daughter was crazy or if she would believe her? I'm forever jealous of their dinner. ;) I like how Kelly made Reese take leftovers to Brian, so in a way she kind of was forced to reconcile. I wonder if Brian came over like he said he would if the ghosts would make their presence known or if they would wait until he left. I'm still wondering if Reese is going to die for reals or not. I also wonder why Reese hasn't told Matt what else is going on at her house when she's home alone. I love that fact that this in fact a horror story but I don't need to hide behind a pillow in order to read it. Great update and Zacky looks adorable...I'm still jealous. =) I look forward to finding out what's going to go down in the next chapter.

Awwww puppy is so cute ^^
Dude, she handled that way better than i would have. Though, i probably would have freaked out more had it actually been a spider XD
Ghost, i can deal, but a spider? AND CRAWLING ON ME?! *runs away screaming*
Ew no.
I'm glad her and Brian are friends again but seriously, screw you, I want enchiladas now and we don't have any *cries like a baby* So hungry.
lol
I freaking love this story!
You must update more often :D
Happy Halloween ^^

this was great, especially for Halloween. i loved it...and it wasn't scary.

ps

your dog is adorable

The story Brian told gave me chills but was very intriguing. The last part of the last update gave me the creeps I would have bolted out the door.

Amazing update :D

Damn, this is getting creepy. But good creepy, just in time for the holidays.

CRAAAAAAAVING another update! Please give me something to look forward to during class!

omg this update was crazy. i dont want a horror story. just make them do a ritual thingy and get rid of the ghost. if it does turn into a horrow story i cant read it anymore. im afraid of that stuff.

I never read this story at night cause it can get so scary! haha
I love it though, so different, but in a good way.
I think the voice she is hearing at the end of the chapter is Matt or someone trying to freak her out, or at least that's what i'm telling myself so I can sleep tonight!
Can't wait for more :)

Wow, the end kindda freaked me out! I wonder if her family heard her scream and what's gonna happen next. I'd be so freaked out that I'd probably run away or, at least, try to run a way. Once again, very great chapter! Scary as well. I love scary stories, haunted houses and everything. It's so intriguing and interesting. I Can't wait to read more about this story!

Matt's cute :') Seriously, he's.. the perfect cousin. I'm jealous of Reese, hhaha.
But damn! The ending of the chapter... Just.. Damn!

oh ape shit, this is really good and i'm glad i didn't read last night, otherwise i would've too scared to sleep, lol. but seriously it was fucking great and i loved it.

Well, thanks for the spoils Casper, now I know she's going to die. Thanks, asshole.
lolololol.
I freaking love this story. *hump*
roflcopter. You write great :D
hehe. Can't freaking wait for more! So excited :D
You must update more often. And i totally want to see Reese and Brian bang hips. In the shower.
No, no, on zee bed and like bamn, ghost gets jealous or something idk XD
BUT SEX :D lol.
Okay I'm done.

i'm reading this and its night I'm super scare no lie. lol