Fire That Burns but Never Dies - Comments

  • krysta2010

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    I love this story you make it so believable and when the ghost dude touched her I go cold chills good job can't wait for the next update :)
    October 27th, 2011 at 07:01am
  • HeatherLH9007

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    Noooo Reese can't die! I like how Reese confronted her mother about the story that Brian told with the boys dying in their house. I'm jealous of their dinner, it sounds delicious right about now. I hope Reese makes amends with Brian soon. I'm still clinging onto hope that something will happen with them. I really hope Reese doesn't die though. That would be a sad day. :( well excellent update and I look forward to the next one. :)
    October 27th, 2011 at 05:23am
  • Through-the-Night

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    I wish I knew which boy is the one that's haunting her. And oh my god! Creepy!
    October 27th, 2011 at 04:10am
  • Synful Shadows

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    Yay! So Brian was being an ass. Now I don't have to hurt him, haha. I can understand that her mom wouldn't know how to tell her about the house, but I'd be pretty pissed off about not being told either. And I'm glad that she got in a better mood. :) She needed it. And oh man, I'm going to be freaked out now every time my TV acts weird haha. That's some scary stuff. Update soon even though I'm going to have the mess scared out of me I'm sure! :D
    October 27th, 2011 at 03:36am
  • Hannahdoll

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    Holy shit...holy shit.
    Yeah, officially creeped out again.
    That ending gave me goosebumps and made me wanna cry.
    October 27th, 2011 at 03:34am
  • The_Used

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    That was a pretty freaky chapter. I wonder if it really was just to scare her or if it was really what happened to the house/boys. (even though I'm sure its the truth that Brian was telling her). Very fun chapter! I always loved scary stories haha I know that if I was her I'd be hella spooked. Can't wait to read the next chapter and see what happens next. ^_^
    October 24th, 2011 at 10:12pm
  • Hannahdoll

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    I had to wait to read this chapter so I wouldn't be home alone.
    Well, at least now we know the story of what happened in the house...poor Reese doesn't believe it.
    October 24th, 2011 at 10:01pm
  • xlookalivesunshinex

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    Woo! Welcome back! :D

    Things are starting to come into place now...Reese obviously doesn't believe the story, but it all makes sense, doesn't it? Well of course, they COULD just be making it up....in fact, they might be. Nonetheless, this is getting more exciting by the minute! And lejkglwrkjlrkj Brian is clearly crushing on Reese. They'd make such a good couple to.
    October 24th, 2011 at 01:08pm
  • majoji

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    It was totally worth the wait! This story is awesome. I love that you make me laugh in one paragraph, while in the next, goose bumps erupt on my arms. You just make me feel like I'm a part of the story.
    October 24th, 2011 at 10:38am
  • KellShadows

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    <333 Up-date again soon!! =)
    October 24th, 2011 at 06:56am
  • Wanderlust.

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    I still really love the photo for the layout it just completes everything amazingly
    On with the show, I want a firepit in my house now. It shall be done.
    I love scary stories. I'm a sucker for a scary story though, I always buy into them at the slightest sign of truth.
    Though the smoke detector going off IS still creepy
    Ever read Possessed?
    October 24th, 2011 at 06:47am
  • HeatherLH9007

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    Aww the truce is over. Now I'm sad. I liked the story about Zacky and the fire pit. I laughed at that part. I'm not so sure about the story that was told by Brian though. I wonder if any of its true or if Matt really told Brian about the dream, and that was just a way to scare the hell out of her. Excellent work, I'm glad you kicked chapter fours ass! :)
    October 24th, 2011 at 05:09am
  • Madisyn Shadows

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    I love this story! It's so great! Especially cause I believe in that shit. Like hardcore. And even if it wasn't a FanFic, it would be amazingly awesome. I think you should switch the charcters a bit and make em your own. It'd still be wicked awesome.
    Can't wait for more!
    October 24th, 2011 at 02:21am
  • Brian Haner Jr

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    I'm thinking it's going to be a twist and it's actually Billy that killed the animals and planted his brothers lighter.
    But I'm probably wrong XD
    I freaking love this damn story!
    It's so beautifully written and just lwjsrfnblkwsngkl;n
    I got so excited when i saw the email telling me this was updated ^^
    LOVED IT!!
    More soon please and thank you.
    October 24th, 2011 at 02:00am
  • Synful Shadows

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    I'm really excited to see what's going to happen next. She's obviously pissed off and planning something, and I want to know what. I'd be kind of pissed too, but I'm kind of thinking that he wasn't trying to scare her. Or maybe I'm just hoping he wasn't trying to scare her and be an ass. Update soonly!
    October 24th, 2011 at 01:08am
  • JustDuckie

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    this story is amazing, i love it.
    October 24th, 2011 at 12:52am
  • Baby.Blue.Eyes

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    Im in love with this!!!! I Really hope Brian comes over to see what's wrong with Reese and tells her that he didn't know and then something freaky happens lol :) I like it when Reese and Brian are nice to each other. Update soon!!!!!!
    October 24th, 2011 at 12:32am
  • The_Used

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    Wow... Where to start? This story is absolutely awesome and is very well written (I'm not surprised, MHHWSAGI was very well written as well :P). I'd be so freaked out if I was in her... The house is without a doubt, haunted. And I'm thinking something evil is living there and the little boy (who probably lived there) is trying to give her a message. I'm thinking the house burned down years ago and was re-built a couple of years ago or something and the spirits still live there (well including the evil one and the boy's). So yeah, I may be wrong though. Can't wait to read more of this story! Once again, another story of yours that I'll be addicted to!
    October 12th, 2011 at 10:12pm
  • Marinesister92

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    I love it. I actually get kind of freaked out when you write the scenes where she see's the little boy. I'm trying to figure out who the little boy is and i'm more concerned with that than the budding romance between brain and her. I so love this and can't wait to read the next chapter. I'm hooked.
    October 9th, 2011 at 03:32pm
  • majoji

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    This story is so freaking good! The way you describe things are just... freaking great! I love the relationship between Matt and her! I used to have that kind of relationship with my cousin - it was almost like he was my brother, you know - but then he attended his first year of high school and changed. Now he doesn't even bother to acknowledge me when we meet each other on the street.

    I don't know why, but the way you write + the design gives me more of a sinister feeling about the story line, like, it is sinister. I like that! Don't know if that was your aim for it, bit something makes this.... dark, but not depressed-dark, more like... spooky-dark. I am so in love with your style of writing.
    October 9th, 2011 at 10:55am