Not Your Every Razorblade Romance... - Comments

first chapter was really good

love it!!!!!!!!

K new reader. Write more. K? K.

I love this. I hope you keep writing. :)

I'm still reading! :-) Sorry I haven't commented on it lately but it is still a wonderful story and the drama just keeps coming. :-) So good! <3

First of all, this story still is amazing as ever.
Wow, I haven't been on here in a while.
Anyway, their relationship is hurting me so much. They have their moments and I want to cheer, but then sadness and betrayal comes in.
Sigh..I still want more though.
Keep up the good work! :D

You need to finish this! I love this story! Keep up the good work! :-)

Comment swapper :D

So... I hate to be rude... but I only read the prologue and part of 'Chapter 1'. You need to go back and reread these chapters yourself. To me, it seems like you leave out words or use the completely wrong ones. For example in chapter 1,

"Suppressing a sigh of relief Ville grabbed his coat and scarf more the sofa, where he had ditched them earlier, and headed down the stone spiral staircase. The only good about this year had been when he bought the historical tower, even now it's beauty and aged charm put a smile on his lips."

This is taken exactly as you have written it. I don't know what a 'more' is, but I'm assuming you mean 'from' or 'off of'. And the only good... what? Thing?

Go back and reread a chapter a day to edit it. This story has potential. Good luck

Your spelling and grammar are pretty good, although some of your paragraphs feel a little long. I think you explained your narrator really well in the first chapter. It didn't feel like it went on forever. I also like your character interactions and the way your character mentioned being in badly written fan fiction. It's cute, even though this is far from badly-written. It's not really my thing, but I hope you keep it up and it goes well for you.

love this story, keep it going!

I think you should you should play it out a little bit longer. I don't think they're ready to be together yet since Ville needs to get his shit straightened out first!
Please update soon <33333333333333333333333333333

Comment swap brought me here.
First thing I must say is that the layout kind of hurt my eyes. It may have just been me thing, but it really didn't work. Now, this is all just a me thing, but I really don't like it when someone just comes out and explains the whole background of a character, like you did in the prologue. Because of this, I was very worried to continue, but I'm very glad I did. Your writing style is great and I was pleasantly surprised by how much I enjoyed your story. There were a few grammar errors, but nothing too huge, and well everybody makes mistakes.
I'm really excited to see what you're going to be doing in the future. You have obvious talent. Keep up the good work.

comment swap,. Ahhh, this is to die for! I wish I found more stories as good as this but I guess thats what uniqueness is! Your spelling and gramar are perfect, paragrapphs are good. I was a little weary about the layout as I thought it was going to hurt my eyes but surprisingly it worked really well witht the story and kind of set the tone. I love where you are going with this, I'm not quite sure who Ville Valo is, I might if I saw a picture but meh, I'm definately reading on with this I think it's amazing! Subscribed =)

Found this through comment swap. I have been reading Ville Valo Fan Fiction for years and have come across somw awful writings, but I am glad to say this is a pretty neat one you have going on here.
A few spelling errors here and there but nothing that isn't easily fixed.
I really like the era you've set the story in, it's kind of 'my era' so to speak so again I am glad I came across you story and am eager to read your next chapter update.
Keep up the fine work!

VILLE IS SUCH AN ASSHOLE!!! I can't believe he was gonna sleep with her while he is still in a relationship. He better make a decision and make it soon!
Please update again soon <333333333

....so I love Ville Valo.
Meaning I love this story. :D

*wipes eyes* I really miss this story. *cries* Please update!! I beg you...

UPDATE WOMAN!!
I'm going crazy over here!!!
Please.........

I found this story on Bloodyvengeance profile page and what a wonderful, unique story. Can't wait for more and if you can, let me know when you update :) Hope you get more readers, you deserve it.

Well damn this was different than I expected. But I'm glad Joanna understands the weird love triangle. Ville should tell her already he's hurting Joanna poor poor her. :(
Other than that I loved it. :D