Merely a Graveyard of Your Former Self - Comments

  • lex;

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    omg that was so cute i just smiled a gigantic smile asjlfksd c:
    November 7th, 2011 at 08:00pm
  • tipy

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    Woooo!! That was intense!!! Best part was when Dallas quotes Monty Python lol
    November 5th, 2011 at 10:51pm
  • carlaangel86

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    Just read the last two updates!! Love them! Oliver is just so cute! I love how you ended the last chapter lol. That was great!
    November 5th, 2011 at 05:19pm
  • FallxFromxSky

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    First, I would like to bow down to your awesomeness for mentioning Jimmy in your story. Seriously, I fucking squealed for no reason.
    Still think Oli and Dallas' pet names for each other are adorable.

    Then it came to the sexual part and I was like 'eww, porn' so I skipped it, then I read the end and didn't get it so I went back read the th sexy time part... wasn't too bad :)
    But yeah, I'm happy that she's finally opening up a bit more.

    Oh, and thanks for the fast update - makes me happy ^-^
    November 5th, 2011 at 04:16pm
  • lex;

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    I FUCKING LOVE YOU OH MY GOD I CAN'T HANDLE IT THIS STORY IS SO PSRFECT AND YOU'RE PERFECT I CANT TAKE IT
    November 5th, 2011 at 03:25pm
  • Colorful_dinos

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    I'm supper! Excited that she's opening her self in that way!
    Thank you for the looong chapter I enjoyed it! :D
    November 5th, 2011 at 03:18pm
  • FallxFromxSky

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    Fuck face. You had to leave it there, didn't you -.-
    And I agree with Colorful_dinos - make her a model for Drop Dead.

    Oh, also love the way you describe Dallas feelings, it's amazing :)

    There better be more soon -.-
    November 4th, 2011 at 06:24pm
  • Colorful_dinos

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    If she wants to be a model then why doesn't Oliver just make he one for drop dead!
    Thank you for the update!
    November 3rd, 2011 at 01:53am
  • Formosa.

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    Amazing as usual m'love :3
    November 2nd, 2011 at 07:32pm
  • tipy

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    I'm not gonna lie Ima little mad that we got left hangin lol but I know all good things come in time :)
    November 2nd, 2011 at 06:12pm
  • lex;

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    oh my god GIRL WHY DID YOU LEAVE IT LIKE THAT SADHFKAWKDFGH
    and nice king's cup rules, i'm gonna use those next time i party haha
    November 2nd, 2011 at 03:05pm
  • FallxFromxSky

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    Oli. Is. Perfect. I'm jealous of a fictional character. DO YOU SEE WHAT YOU'VE TURNED ME INTO?!?!?
    The way he was handleing her was so gentle, and carrying, and loving, and holy crap I want that :P
    And then she got turned on and... I admit, I laughed. I dunno why, I just did.
    The ending is true though - still made me laugh
    Loved it - more soon! :P
    October 30th, 2011 at 04:51am
  • tipy

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    Sorry I haven't commented in awhile I love the way the story is turning and how Oli is being so gentle with her. Keep up the amazing work! :)
    October 30th, 2011 at 01:15am
  • hellxoxsunshine

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    Way to leave off on a cliffhanger Dx
    October 29th, 2011 at 09:37pm
  • lex;

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    Aw oh my god I love how sweet he is with her, it's so perfect. This was beautifully written c:
    October 29th, 2011 at 07:57pm
  • KeriContagious

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    Loved this update! Can't wait for the next! :D
    October 29th, 2011 at 07:43pm
  • carlaangel86

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    Loved the update! Oliver is so sweet to her! I am loving this story.
    October 29th, 2011 at 07:16pm
  • Colorful_dinos

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    I'm supper glad that she's trying to get even more comfy with Oliver!
    I thought it was really funny when Oliver told her to check if she was wet infront of him! Haha
    Thank you! Thank you! For the update! :D
    October 29th, 2011 at 07:09pm
  • FallxFromxSky

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    This is one of my favourite chapters too - agreeing with you there. It was so. Freakin. Adorable! I swear, if Oli ever says 'gosh darn cute' in real life... with his accent... ohmigod!
    And I agree with Dallas - I love his rose tattoo. It's beautiful
    I love the nicknames they came up for each other too. Damn... wish I had someone to call me Lovebird -.-
    Yeah, loved this chapter and shiz. Hope more will be soon ^-^

    (P.S I think that Batman's a pretty shitty superhero too)
    October 28th, 2011 at 04:38am
  • Katycakes

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    Boobear and Lovebird are so cute. Ace of a story I must say.
    October 28th, 2011 at 04:13am