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  • horan-lightupmycurls

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    ohfuckingwell.
    November 19th, 2011 at 11:01pm
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    It's kinda awkward because this story has so many comments but only, like one star :/
    November 19th, 2011 at 08:24pm
  • After Twilight

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    LolageXD
    November 19th, 2011 at 05:26am
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    fail- gabbie *
    November 19th, 2011 at 04:52am
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    GABY FTW!!
    November 19th, 2011 at 04:52am
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    Gabbie will fix itXD
    November 18th, 2011 at 07:46pm
  • horan-lightupmycurls

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    Lol, IDK. I didn't do it...
    November 15th, 2011 at 07:19am
  • ClassicRomantic

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    by the way, whats going on with the layout? the background is kind bleeaahh
    November 15th, 2011 at 05:53am
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    Coolooo!
    November 15th, 2011 at 05:50am
  • horan-lightupmycurls

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    OH and Laura, Aries is Alby's new girlfriend.
    November 14th, 2011 at 08:41am
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    haha!! he fainted because he was overwhelmed by Aries and also a second reaction..
    November 14th, 2011 at 08:40am
  • After Twilight

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    Loved your chapter Bexz! LOL, did he faint because of Aries and his hormones . . . or was it a second reaction?
    November 14th, 2011 at 07:03am
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    You made a small mistake in the last chapter of Lissa. First you read that she's tired and weakened by a long days work and then she suddenly hasn't felt tired or hungry for the past week. Kind of odd don't you think? Other than that I love the story. c:
    November 11th, 2011 at 09:11am
  • ClassicRomantic

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    HELLO?
    November 2nd, 2011 at 06:46am
  • ClassicRomantic

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    Why did the background image change? I liked the old one....
    October 30th, 2011 at 09:23am
  • ClassicRomantic

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    Well, would he get one from the Serpentor and Serpentess training compound or would it be from the mainland? also, you ould create a new charater, not that you write perspectives from, but a charter we write about.... I did. You could also go for Lisa :)
    October 30th, 2011 at 09:22am
  • horan-lightupmycurls

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    ok. uhhh... well alby is in a dark caveish sort of room where he was taken by the snakey thing..... ok..... well he's there and stuff happens. also- i was just wondering, i wanted alby to have a girlfriend- but idk... becuase if alby does then you wont be able to so idk,
    October 30th, 2011 at 06:47am
  • ClassicRomantic

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    I love the new layout, although, the image up the centre is not working :/
    i still need to write the next half of that chapter, though, because you don't know whats wrong with him yet. Well, I'll spoil it for you.... he had an illergic reaction to the venom, and he is currently in RHIEB- Recruit Hospital International, European Branch.
    October 30th, 2011 at 05:36am
  • horan-lightupmycurls

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    Ohhh ok...
    October 30th, 2011 at 04:46am
  • After Twilight

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    Yay! You finally updated - now for yours BextahXD
    October 30th, 2011 at 02:08am
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