Amazing as per usual. I always love it when you update this story, and once again it's always great to get a little bit more background on Nathaniel. I love when it's just the two of them alone, they have such god damned cute scenes! You are an amazing writer my dear :) xXx
Hi! I love the story, just thought you might wanna know that you spelt friends wrong on the summary page. It's spelt friensd. Can't wait for the next chapter!
I don't even know what to say when I comment on this, because it is completely perfect. I absolutely love this; and I can't believe I haven't commented before! I am an awful person. And, even more so, I can't believe you don't have more comments! I can't wait for the next chapter.
My god, Nathaniel is the most amazing and wonderful mate... I hope they pick up Hayden before he takes her to his home. Loved it as always, it was brilliantly written, had me on the edge of my seat and it was just awesome! Can't wait for more xXx
I loooove ur storyy!!! Its amazing but I just can't help but think that Ams is actually powerful. Without her realizing it...like she has some kind of powers herself...and her palm burnt her..it was her dad right? Anyways I really am in love with this story can't wait to read the next chapter (:
Fuck that bitch needs to die. And what the hell is her dad's problem?! I really hope that Nathaniel kicks his ass some time during the later chapters. They are despicable! Loved it nonetheless, it's always wonderful when you update :) xXx
Awesome as per usual! I do worry about Eliza though, she just seems like the biggest bitch, aside from her mother anyway. It was also really good to get the 'family history' of Nathaniel too, it was really heartfelt. You my dear are an amazing writer with so much talent, honest to god I'm jealous. If you want I can make you a banner for the story? Just tell me if you do and I shall make one for you :) xXx