It killed me when there wasn't another chapter :D You have grammar mistakes, but I like the story :) Maybe a bit more info on how Gerard's family got the curse?
Ooh Gee's going around, turning people in ashes? C: cool *nods nods* I just hope he won't hide in his room now or something, because he's such a monster etc. And "Frank doesn't deserve to be around me, what if he gets hurt too" shit C: I liked it C:
Whoa, his father is terrible D: I hope it's just stress and he doesn't really blame anything on Frank... Though I'd like to know more :) and he didn't have time to introduce Gerard's idea :(
I love this! Great story so far but whats with Gerard!!? Update! Only thing i have to say about this thats 'constructive' is you should definitely make your chapters longer because there really short!