A Simple White Rose - Comments

Lol, okay.

lol ty i'll edit later :P

In "Pansy"...
3rd paragraph--Capitalize "Stupify" "Manners", not ""Manors" "infront" needs a space.
4th--coughed, not caughed.
"staring down at the table and noticed..." needs a comma after "table" and you could omit "a" right there. It's not necessary.
That's it for this chapter.

This plot has potential (just like the other story I commented upon) and it's really got my attention. I really suggest proofreading and using an online spell check as it'll really help your writing, but overall this is really good. I hope you'll keep up the great work. :)

Broke up with Jason after a month, started dating Jack. Gary likes me again, along with a couple others. Had a wonderful Valentine's Day. Hope to hear from you soon. Ich liebe dich! <3

Nm. Broke up with Christian, started going out with Jason, found out that a couple other guys like me...Wbu?

LOL okay. I'll fix those :P What's up girly girl??

Lol, I guess I could say hi, after all this time. So, what's up?

These are all for Chapter 11, btw.

Manners. You typed "in front" as one word. "Coughed" not "Caughed". 7th paragraph, you need a comma for "I mean, you are..." 11th paragraph, "staring at the table, and noticed..." needs a comma.

Yeah me 2(: lol and ty Schwester :D

Haha...nice way tell the secret!
I kinda think blaise shuld die btw(:

Keep writing lol
Luv u!(:

Cookie for the first comment :D :D :D
Okay, not really, but hey(: I tried..... :D