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  • lady_enygma

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    Aw that was an amazing last chapter. I adore Allie and Patrick as a couple
    March 6th, 2014 at 10:18am
  • Ali Cat

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    The last chapter definitely needs some smut. And that's all I got to say about that!
    March 3rd, 2014 at 03:17am
  • lady_enygma

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    This has cut me up the same as last time round :( I can't wait until their paths cross again
    March 1st, 2014 at 01:13am
  • sailorapril

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    It was absouletly perfect and sweet and very intense and at the same time true to patrick, i love the direction this is going :)
    February 28th, 2014 at 09:10pm
  • lady_enygma

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    WOW wow wow wow wow wow wow wow that was ddefinitely different to the original. Loved it
    February 27th, 2014 at 08:54am
  • Ali Cat

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    GOD BLESS THIS UPDATE ALI GOD BLESS THIS ENTIRE STORY. that smut was so hot oh my god I'm so sorry I haven't commented I've been so busy. I really love this story probably 100 times more than the first time I read it. I love all the new attention to detail and just everything about this. I can't wait for another update and I'll comment a thousand times if that means you'll write more smut.
    February 27th, 2014 at 07:44am
  • sailorapril

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    Yes yws yes YES YES YES YES why does this not have more comments come on you guys we all want patrick sexy time!
    February 26th, 2014 at 01:38am
  • lady_enygma

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    It would be an amazing thing if they did
    February 24th, 2014 at 09:29am
  • lackadaisicalify

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    WOW I wasn't expecting that to happen in the short time Allie went inside her house. Her and Patrick are moving fast (in a good way) and I'm really excited to see what happens in the next chapter Wink
    February 24th, 2014 at 04:06am
  • lady_enygma

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    Wow, definitely different, I love it
    February 23rd, 2014 at 08:48pm
  • MsElizabethWentz

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    i love this!!!!!
    update soon
    February 23rd, 2014 at 03:36am
  • lackadaisicalify

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    Ah that was so cute, I'm glad they're getting comfortable with each other <3
    February 22nd, 2014 at 05:48pm
  • ToxicMayson

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    Aww I feel bad for Ali :(
    February 22nd, 2014 at 08:55am
  • Ali Cat

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    I really like this compared to the original. Even though I know the general plot already I really like that you're touching it up and adding things here and there to really make it shine!
    February 20th, 2014 at 10:56pm
  • lady_enygma

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    Patrick is the perfect hero
    February 20th, 2014 at 11:01am
  • lackadaisicalify

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    I didn't read the original version of this story but I love what you've rewritten so far. Also, it was kind of eerie that you chose November 10th because that's my sister's birthday. Weeeird.
    February 20th, 2014 at 04:01am
  • La Notte Dei Demoni.

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    I really feel for Allie, her parents are such shits! I hope Patrick can keep comforting her!
    February 20th, 2014 at 03:26am
  • sailorapril

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    Patrick, im still lauging about him accidentally knocking her out, thats so like him.
    February 19th, 2014 at 07:31pm
  • sailorapril

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    THIS I LOVE THIS SO MUCH
    February 19th, 2014 at 07:31pm
  • La Notte Dei Demoni.

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    I'm glad she's gone with him, this is really cute!
    February 19th, 2014 at 10:36am