Truant Wave - Comments

lady_enygma (100)

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Aw that was an amazing last chapter. I adore Allie and Patrick as a couple

March 6th, 2014 at 10:18am

Ali Cat (100)

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The last chapter definitely needs some smut. And that's all I got to say about that!

March 3rd, 2014 at 03:17am

lady_enygma (100)

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This has cut me up the same as last time round :( I can't wait until their paths cross again

March 1st, 2014 at 01:13am

sailorapril (100)

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It was absouletly perfect and sweet and very intense and at the same time true to patrick, i love the direction this is going :)

February 28th, 2014 at 09:10pm

lady_enygma (100)

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WOW wow wow wow wow wow wow wow that was ddefinitely different to the original. Loved it

February 27th, 2014 at 08:54am

Ali Cat (100)

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GOD BLESS THIS UPDATE ALI GOD BLESS THIS ENTIRE STORY. that smut was so hot oh my god I'm so sorry I haven't commented I've been so busy. I really love this story probably 100 times more than the first time I read it. I love all the new attention to detail and just everything about this. I can't wait for another update and I'll comment a thousand times if that means you'll write more smut.

February 27th, 2014 at 07:44am

sailorapril (100)

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Yes yws yes YES YES YES YES why does this not have more comments come on you guys we all want patrick sexy time!

February 26th, 2014 at 01:38am

lady_enygma (100)

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It would be an amazing thing if they did

February 24th, 2014 at 09:29am

lackadaisicalify (100)

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WOW I wasn't expecting that to happen in the short time Allie went inside her house. Her and Patrick are moving fast (in a good way) and I'm really excited to see what happens in the next chapter

February 24th, 2014 at 04:06am

lady_enygma (100)

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Wow, definitely different, I love it

February 23rd, 2014 at 08:48pm

MsElizabethWentz (100)

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i love this!!!!!
update soon

February 23rd, 2014 at 03:36am

lackadaisicalify (100)

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Ah that was so cute, I'm glad they're getting comfortable with each other <3

February 22nd, 2014 at 05:48pm

ToxicMayson (100)

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Aww I feel bad for Ali :(

February 22nd, 2014 at 08:55am

Ali Cat (100)

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I really like this compared to the original. Even though I know the general plot already I really like that you're touching it up and adding things here and there to really make it shine!

February 20th, 2014 at 10:56pm

lady_enygma (100)

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Patrick is the perfect hero

February 20th, 2014 at 11:01am

lackadaisicalify (100)

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I didn't read the original version of this story but I love what you've rewritten so far. Also, it was kind of eerie that you chose November 10th because that's my sister's birthday. Weeeird.

February 20th, 2014 at 04:01am