ive just read all of this and its amazing! val has like changed her self so much and all for oliver! thats not a true relationship, oliver's got her all fucked up and stuff like how he wants her. she should strip off all her hair back to normal and go back to herself, see if oliver likes her like that! god, he is such a pig in this story! but its sooooo fucking amazing! im like hooked! you must finish this story! its got amazingness written all over it! i really hope you update this one!!