Carter - Comments

I'd love it if you could translate, it'd really help me out. Ah, the fateful meeting between two new lovers. Your characters are extremely well rounded and I find they lovable and memorable. I doesn't really feel much like it's set back in the 70s, but maybe that's because I don't know much about that time period. There's not much more for me to say except for I look forward to this.

I agree with pretty much everyone on the Layout, it's one of the amazing contributions to it. Other than that, so far from what you have I absolutely love the detail that you put into this story. Detail is one of the biggest things that draw me into stories, and so far you're spot on.

The layout is amazing; the way you've got it set up and all the colors, it's absolutely perfect. I literally think it's the best layout I've seen on the whole site.

I love the characters you've created. They're so deep and rounded and their relationships with each other are great. I love the mention of the marriage certificate and MAN when I got to the end of the first chapter, I was surprised and please and it's just really great.

Also, you have no grammar mistakes that I saw, so that was wonderful, too. Keep up the good work!

I liked this...I love that it's placed in the past and in a tiny little contry town. I think to many stories are written about people in LA and New York and stuff like that, but this is quite refreshing.

I do agree with Queen Of Hearts...if you bumped up the font maybe one notch it'd be alot easier to read because with how long your paragraphs are and how long the chapters are the tiny text makes it run together slightly. Larger text wouldmake for an easier read indeed/

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I really like this. I love the way you started to story with all those questions and it really just setted the flow for the entire chapter. Nice.

The browns in the layout work really well together. My only suggestion would be to bump up the font. the small text is very daunting to read. I thought the summery was very well put together. It gave the reading a bit of information, but also a bit of mystery. The descriptions of her as an old lady were wonderful. They were also tinged with a bit of sadness. Amazing attention to detail. I was kinda iffy on this, but I really do like it. Especially the ending sentence in the prologue and how it ties into the story and title.

At first I thought she was asking those questions to be deep and philosophical, but towards the end I was like, 'ooooh, maybe she really doesn't know what's going on...'

She's an old woman now, right? That's why? Hmm. It looks interesting so far!

I love how the layout fits so well together. All the brown tones in the banner with the two brown patterns really seem to match well. Not to mention how the font for "Carter" just goes so perfectly. Usually simple fonts make layouts look boring. I like the summary. It's one of those long, detailed ones that you can read and actually go on to the first chapter instead of to your home page. It really made me want to read more, which I liked. The prologue reminded me of like, Titanic, where the old woman starts telling her story. And I dislike that kind of writing. I'm hoping we won't randomly have to hear from the old woman until the end. I feel like it breaks story flow sometimes, but however you write is your choice. I believe I'm already subscribed to this, but I hope my little review here helps you.

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I like the layout, but the words are a bit too small for my liking. I didn't have to squint to read it so that is always a plus on my end. I believe, in the summary, that - arithmatic is spelled arithmetic. The summary was lovely. I was instantly drawn to want to read the first chapter. I actually liked the questions, I don't really agree with the statement above. Everyone has different tastes. I also noticed that in this sentence - ...to change form my, you probably meant from and not form. It's like The Notebook to me. I love it!

The story seems interesting, but I would consider revising the first few paragraphs. The questions don't really draw the reader in.

Definitely continue it.

First of all I love the layout, it is gorgeous and fits your story.

Next I just freaking love this story, your prologue and use of the time was great. You had enough detail to really give the feel of the story and where she was but not too much that I just wanted the story to me faster. This story has a ton of great potential and I can not wait to read more of what you write. I liked the feel of the story and how you sometimes added words that may not have been needed but still added a bit to the feel of the era of the writing. Just a wonderful job!

If I had to be honest, I was very confused in the beginning. I mean, why were her feet crooked, why was she with nurses, etc. But then I realized that it was Carter, just old Carter and not young Carter. And then I was really, really freakin' happy by the end of this because of the fact that it turns out Carter is now old and she ended up getting a book. Not just any book, her diary. Ahaha very clever. I love where this is going so far (:

Very, very descritive. You really know how to paint a picture. I'm not quite sure, but the questions at the very stary of the prouloge...should they be in the question mark thingyies? If she is talking then yes. I think that was the only thing I caught....no wait...

"Those however were the bad days"

I was told with the word however....you need a comma after it, but I don't think the word is needed for that line, but if you want to keep it then I suggest changing it around to- "However, those were the bad days." since it is considered a "transition word" when it comes to moving from one paragraph to another.

Other hen that I really got sucked into it, the layout really matches the flow of the story, but the text for me was a bit too small, but I got bad eyes anyways.

The layout is fantastic! Very easy to read.
The summary is great to it makes me wanna read more I can't wait for you to start posting chapters!

This layout is beauitiful, really.
The summary is short, but there is so much detail that it makes me want o read more.
You should really put up chapters of it(:

Dang I already commented /: .... I like the way you use the words and how the beginning just enters into the senerey of the story, the imagery so well i can like visual everything. It really does grip me into wanting to read more.

The layout is really pretty. It has a pretty good "country" feel, which is what you were going for, by what I read in the summary. x) I really do like the layout. The colors go nicely together and the banner picture is really beautiful.

Now, the summary intrigues and grips the reader. It gets them interested, so very well done there. :D I really like the last bit. It gets me very much excited for the romance! I have a feeling they might have a misunderstanding that will have the girl mad at the boy for being arrogant and such. xD I love those sorts of scenes. Overall, very well done here. I don't have anything to complain about! All grammar and spelling was very well done in my eyes. Good luck with this, girl! <3

I love the way you describe things. I wish i could make this story... I love little country type stories. ('': Good luck on this I would like to be commented when updated please? I love the banner and layout, it's very pretty and i just love this all and all so far.

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This looks really promising, already subscribed.

This seems like it'll be really cute, in that so-cliche-it-is-irresistable way. :') Plus, I am so into stories that take place in the country. I can really see this going places, hah. :)