More Than Words - Comments

n'awww such a cute chapter!! :)

They are just too great for they're own good.

They're perfect for each other! :P

IT IS MY FAVORITE. And it makes me feel all fuzzy inside especially on this, the day of Cupid Valentino :D
Happy V-Day by the way. Awesome? I hope :)
Let's get into it then. Totally lame that they're "not looking". Couple of liar pants. Nick and his stupid pretty eyes. How couldn't Ellory fall for him?? Ugh. I think all the sheets should 'acadentally' burn and so Nick will be forced to sleep with Ellory all the time. Muah-ha-haaaa.

OH YOU DARE ME HUH?!? Challenge accepted. You're about to hate me ;)
First things first, Ellory needs to stop being so down on himself because fuck. What a way to wake up. You really think Nick would be cuddling you if he didn't totally and completely dig you? And holy hell, breakfast in bed. Why would he do that if he didn't want your body? AND shameless flirting. AND ass shaping jeans. Also, yes, I agree. Watching toned guys period is fucking amazing.

If you honestly updated every time I commented them you'd be out of chapters. Juuuuuust sayin. And dude, still no kiss. What gives? Kiss on the cheek doesn't even count. But okay, cuddling kind of makes up for it. But even STILL. I want some hot lip on lip action. Haa. Okay, maybe just go with what you've got. It seems to be working ;P
I love that Ellory is keeping his mom's spirit alive through hospitality. Obviously he was raised right.

Dude! What happened to the kiss? There has to be a kiss! You can't just do that! Tease.
After a 'date type thing' as perfect as that there can't not be a kiss. And yes, I used a double negative.
In other news, Nick just keeps getting better and better. It's as if they were literally made for each other.

More!!!!!!!!!

*sigh* They are just perfect! Haha
Love this story! :D

I'm glad I found this story. You write really well, and this story is adorable. I can see this easily becoming one of my favorite stories on this site.
I really can't wait to see what happens next.

I just started reading this and love it already! How have you not got like a billion comments? :)

Oh fuck you. Why would you do this Casey? Why?!?
They just need to go out and be happy and get frisky and feisty on the dance floor. You're just being a jerk face. Don't be a jerk face Casey. The next step up from a jerk face is a duche canoe. Be careful.
I really like how he still goes to Carly to gush. It's adorable and loyal and... Adorable.

Aw they're cute c;

Ohhkay, that makes a lot more sense :)
Nicholas is so adorable. And Texan.
The two-step? So cute. I can't believe how amazing he is.
I think Ellory is cute too. See? They're already so sweet together :D

Love! <3

OHLOOK! I already started reading this! Sweetness.
Okay. Just one thing. In like, chapter 4, Ellory mentions that Nicholas is going to live with him? It wasn't mentioned anywhere else in the story which kinda confused me. And okay, one more thing. My sister has this metaphor where she uses a jelly doughnut. The doughnut is the dialogue and the jelly is everything else. I don't think you have enough jelly. Like, the dialogue is fucking amazing and sweet and entertaining, it just seems like a lot. I guess just fill it in....

OTHER THAN THAT I love this. You should have gotten me to read this sooner, Jesus. I love the idea behind it and I definitely love the execution <3

They're so cute :x

ooh I love this story! They seem like they would make the perfect couple already! :D

Can't wait for the next update! *subscribes*

I love this story. It's got a good storyline. It's original :D I usually don't like stories after I've only read the first chapter or so, but I really like this one <3 Please update soon :)
P.S. Nicholas sounds really hot xD

I love this. <3

Update soon! I like :D