Virgin Camp - Comments

PLEASE.

I just started reading. When I got to the last chapter, I read the info tab and was so disappointed with the last update date. PLEAAASEEEE UPDATE THIS.

Is this going to be updated soon?

Okay, I jsut startes reading this and its amazing! Youhave to update asap because I need to read more its so freaking amazing!

I DEMAND AN UPDATE!!!!! *whispers* please...

I miss this!

UPDATE! please. c;

Great update! :D

I'm blowing through this story like wildfire. It's just too perfect. You know, I've read a lot of stories on here in the few weeks I've been here but this is my favorite oh my goodness it's flawless and I just want you to know this story is special and moving on.

SO I decided that I don't want to bother you with comment after comment for each chapter, so I'll just do a mega review starting with Chp. 2 since I sort of freaked over Chp. 1 down there.

CHP 2: Oh, I love this chapter.

Before I get to the good stuff, I just want to point out a few grammatical errors. I swear they're probably just typos and I'm being super nit-picky but this story is flawless.

"That was never part of my plans." - I would make this "That was never part of my plan."

"I didn’t get my period until I was fifteen and I didn’t boobs until I was sixteen." - Self-explanatory. Probably a typo. The "I didn't" can be taken out or a "get" can be inserted after boobs.

"nobel-prize winning scientist" - Capitalize "Nobel Prize" and put the hyphen after "Prize" like this: "Nobel Prize-winning."

That's it! See, you're FLAWLESS.

"Because you know what sucks about being a girl? Expectations. So many fucking expectations."
Do you know how much I adore this line? It is perfect beyond perfect and so mf true and just perfect.

"They invented a fire escape for a reason."
I laughed out loud.

"“What would be so bad about having sex with me?""
Same here oh my god.

Hhahahaa oh they signed Ryan up for camp, too. I should have expected that, but I didn't. Oh, I love you.

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CHP 3: I love you so much.

Some quick grammar fixes. No big deal.

"Trish and Sawyer following behind me." - To improve the flow, I would delete "behind."

Aw, did your boyfriend send you here so you could learn how to fuck him properly? - You forgot quotations around it in the story (:

THAT IS IT YOU ROCK I SWEAR

ANYWAYS

"Wait, no. I wasn’t completely alone. I still had my virginity."
I can't stop laughing I swear to god and sprinkles

I'm not even kidding you Natalie is so mf funny and sarcastic aww and she's kind of sweet, too, I mean, protecting Kaylie by going to this camp.

Virgin Slayers. You are a genius.
DFADKSFJDKSGAKSFJSKAF oh my goodness gracious you

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CHP 4: Ryan will be the death of me. God I love her.

and Damon is my kind of guy. Cocky as hell. Just like Ryan.

I SENSE ROMANCE.

I love this chapter so much just like the whole thing and you.

THIS COMMENT IS GETTING WAY DAMN LONG SO I'M JUST GOING TO LEAVE YOU FOR A LITTLE WHILE AND COME BACK AND FANGIRL OVER THE REST OF THIS STORY OKAY UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN

Just read the first chapter and oh my goodness this is so cute.
I love Natalie and Trish is funny as heck.
ON TO THE NEXT ONE! Subscribed, I love this too much so far (:

Why am I just now finding this?? This is an amazing idea and I find Ryan hilarious :) lol update soon??

I love, love, love this story. It's so funny, and perfect in everyway possible.

Are you going to update soon?

I feel bad because it took me this long to comment...
I loved the latest chapter! Just now had a chance to read it, but it was good, it really was.
Interesting how they're under surveillance now. Talk about intrusive. :/
And lol. I loved this part:
'“Nice one, fuck-knuckle,” he said, and I could hear the smile in his voice. I smiled, too.
“You’re welcome, dick-splash.”'
Too funny with the nicknames. XD
Can't wait for more! You're doing an amazing job, you two! <3

@Suck My Kiss I love the song 'Suck My Kiss' lol
Anyways....we need an update soon. Im talking to both of the writers....

Hi, thought I let you know that you are in my recommendation list (: blog

Girl this story is amaze balls, so you better update this fast as a lightning.

Hi, thought I let you know that you are in my recommendation list (: blog

Girl this story is amaze balls, so you better update this fast as a lightning.

Oh and I haven't had sex yet and this story is FAR from depressing.

Oh and I haven't had sex yet and this story is FAR from depressing.

LOL my friends would totally send me here. I love this story, I think it's funny as hell. UPDATE! <3