Virgin Camp - Comments

So I found this picture a little while ago, and it made me think about this story:



:) Just thought I'd share with you.
And also commenting again to say that I miss this story. :( I really hope you guys find inspiration to update again soon.
We're all waiting for an update! :D

I love Owen. Especially when Nat saw him checking Jennifer out. He's... ugh. Not sexy or hot like Damon probably is, but Owen is awkward in a cute way. HAHA. :D

It's 11:33 on a Sunday night. I need to be doing homework.

Nah. Virgin Camp.

Update soon :)

So, I love this story. . . update? I'll be counting the seconds, just to let you know.

(i also really like the ATL reference in the author's note of ch10)

haha, yes, everyone is totally going to get pregnant and die! And don't worry, I don't find it awkward at all, I think it's really hilarious! keep it up:P

The camp is such a strange concept! But it looks like it's going to be really interesting, can't wait to read more :)

WAT IS THIS WONDERFUL PEICE OF BEAUTY AND EPIC.
OH MY GOSH.
WHY AM I JUST NOW SEEING THIS.
QUESTION MARKS CAN'T EVEN COMPREHEND HOW LOVELY THIS IS.
I JUST, WAT. YES. YES. YES.
YOU PEOPLE ARE JUST PERFECTION ON A RAINBOW PLATTER OF LOVE.

I like it

oh my gosh. I love it when you guys update.

Loved the update! :D
Great job with the new chapter! :) Hm... so did Damon really date Jennifer? And is he still dating her? She's kind of fake if you ask me... but then again, I think that's how you're meaning to make her look. XD
Two things I noted deary:
'I hated sitting in a class, having to listen to listen to things I didn’t really care about.'
^You repeated the words 'to listen'. lol. I don't think you meant to do that, but if you did... it didn't really make sense to me. XD
And here:
'They just stood there and did nothing while Jennifer become that girl.'
The bolded is to intialize where you italicized it, that's not the part wrong. I believe 'become' should be 'became' instead, right? I didn't really think 'become' really made sense there.
But minor errors, really. Again, I tend to over-analyze things. XD
I laughed so hard at the next part, though, a little after that second line ^ I pointed out. When Natalie grabbed the phone from Jennifer and said, '“I’m sorry, Jennifer’s not available right now. She’s busy getting chlamydia.”' XD So hilarious. I also loved this line, '"This whole camp was founded on a pile of bullshit."' :P
Hm... and I couldn't help but sense the dramatic change of the way Natalie treated Owen in this chapter. I mean, did his awkwardness bother her that much before? She seemed all happy with him before. But maybe she just kind of had it in this chapter. Kind of shocked me when she went off on him like that, though. :O But hey, at least we know she can stand up for herself! And have a sense of humor, with discussing awkward things with him. XD And plus, she stood up to Jennifer as well.
She has some newfound courage. :D
Amazing job with the update! Sorry for the delay in commenting! But I love this and can't wait for the next update! :D

yessss!
take that bitch down!

Natalie is so cool! She's like a hero, y'know, standing up for the less fortunate.
Her and Owen are adorable. Awkward people are awesome when you get them to be less awkward.
They're awesome.(:
I love how you write. It's so vivid and real and I just picture everything in my mind so clearly. You are very talented.

ai lub diz
sew much
im gewing 2 dy
0mg
lol.
ANYWAYS.
YOU GO, GIRL!
YOU TELL JENNISLUT OFF! MHM, GET IT, YOU B GIRL!
please update soon. c:

Since it's almost 12:30 in the morning and I stayed up just to read this I'm gonna make this comment short:

Damn, Natalie.

That is the end. Goodbye.

(NATALIE'S AWESOME AS BALLS)

Jennifer deserves to be smacked in the face.
With a chair.
Made of metal.
SHE FRUSTRATES ME.

Woo hoo! Go Natalie! And Owen isn't too horrible either though he doesn't do much. :)

I want to know why he was so upset about what Ryan said about the tramp. GREAT update, please put more soonn(:

I think I'm enjoying this story waaay too much, haha. It's just a clever story line idea..

(P.S I feel like an idiot.. I accidentally pressed submit even when I didn't finish my comment
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I don't know why but