Summer Shadows - Comments

I think this chapter was really good :) and sad too. I don't know if I could live with the fact that I'm around someone everyday that looks like the guy I love who died.

OK Darren just hit 15.5 out of 10 on the creepy scale *shudders*
Hopefully as time progresses Maggie and Oliver can be friendly enough so that Maggie can tell Oliver about her ability and warn him...
But then again what would she say.....

'Oh and by the way my psycho Ex-boyfriend who is a ghost is coming to kill you because we're friends'

Yeah like that's gunna go down well -_-
Someone should really call a Witch Doctor or a Sharman or even the freaking Ghostbusters!
Anyone that can kick Darren into the afterlife...

Update?

If Darren isn't one of the creepiest psycho-stalker-homicidal-ghoul characters I've ever seen, then I don't know who is!

I have feelings. Always emotional when you update this one.

GIRLLLL, STOP! I was actually really into this chapter. So happy you updated, like you don't even know. You really do know exactly when I'm feeling my lowest CAUSE THAT'S WHEN YOU UPDATE AND THEN MY DAY IS MADE! But yeah omg okay I just really want her to actually speak to Darren. Like I know he fucks around with her, but I want them to talk like her and Simon would. ALSO OMG SHE NEEDS TO SAY SOMETHING TO OLIVER, ALSO HOLY SHIT I WILL ABSOLUTELY DIEEEEEEEE IF HIS DAD DIES.

So I have a feeling that this story should be updated. Is this a good feeling or an incorrect feeling?

Hun your writing is art I love the bit of Simon we see in her dreams cause I know I've been craving to see him and love the darker and darker Darren seems to get through the story please continue your amazing work cause it's a story that leaves me haunted for more.

OH GOD. Sorry I took forever to read this. BUT OH GOD. BAD DARREN. Don't make me jump into the story and end you! D:

You can take all the time you need because each chapter you write is absolutely stunning.

Oh my God, I was not expecting that all BUT NOW I UNDERSTAND WHAT YOUR TWEET WAS ABOUT!! I can deal with her death though. But oh my, if Darren kills Oliver.... LOL I WILL LOSE MY MIND!! Absolutely lose it! And I totally get you on the updates thing. Sorry if I get a little pushy sometimes, I can't help it..!:)

Holy shit dude. I love Oliver, but this story is taking a scary turn!

:)

loved it ...how u gave maggie an outlet for her bottled up emotions ....can't wait for the next one

This story is getting really good...I can't wait for the next update! (:

Chassie was it?
Wasn't she the ex-best friend because she was cheating with Darren behind Maggie's back???

Anyway, why the heck is he even doing this!? There isn't an explanation as to why he's making her life a living hell... I mean I know she's sort of the reason he's stone cold dead but seriously he should have known with the line of work he was in that would have been one of the most obvious hazards!

Anyway anyway, glad to see her and Ollie are making... um... rope bridges between their issues?... Well you get it, I'm glad to see their yelling instead of bottling... because bottling has been proven to be very much bad.

OK I reckon this would be a great time for me to stop talking and go get some grub I'm STARVED!
So TTFN and please update again when you thinks its... well good enough for us to read... :D

Indeed, like everyone else here I am excited to see what happens next. My mind had been swirling with the possibilities you've set out for Oliver and Maggie, and I suspect Simon as well. Cal seems odd, I do think that she should keep up her guard, but Maggie is a smart girl.

May the writing muse be with you! :D

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh my gosh, I was so excited when I saw this reminder in my e-mail! I loved the chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next. You're characterization is just amazing! I'll be waiting for your next update ^.^

Awesome Chapter!!! To be honest, I can't say I like Cal very much though. There's just something off about him........ Also, just like pixiesticks650, i was wondering if the woman and the little girl were ghosts (maybe they were slaves from the past, and the mom was weaving baskets to sell at the slave market?) Just a guess. Anyways, I can't wait till Oliver and Maggie shopping. That's bound to cause some drama!!! :)

So I'm kind of curious about the woman weaving baskets and the little girl at the slave market. Were they also ghosts?