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  • niceneasy36

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    Yay! It makes me smile when I get the email that you've updated! Something odd is up with Oliver and I can't wait to find out what it is.
    December 11th, 2012 at 02:12am
  • NothinNNomore

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    I am so incredibly excited that you updated again!! I love this story so much, I want to marry it. I really hope that you update again soon. If you do, I can forgive you for taking so long with this chapter ;D
    December 11th, 2012 at 01:32am
  • WhoAreYouJudy

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    WAIT BUT WHY WAS HE IN THE HOSPITAL AGAIN? HmMmmmm! Curious, very curious. So shocked she basically told James to fuck off. That took some guts. Also can't tell if I like Cal or not. I do, but I'm still kind of suspicious of him. I don't know why, hm.
    December 10th, 2012 at 09:31pm
  • Cosmic_Fae

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    Hahaha, Thomas the tour guide... sorry, that reminded me of something. :P I'm going to throw a fit if her and Cal end up together- I'm still supporting Maggie and Simon. Anyway, I hope Maggie and Oliver can get along at some point... and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter! Hopefully your internet doesn't crap out again.
    December 10th, 2012 at 08:19pm
  • DeathsxSweetxLullaby

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    James is a conniving S.O.B. isn't he?
    December 10th, 2012 at 05:11pm
  • Pineapplez

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    http://youtu.be/VoW9czgQBqE
    December 10th, 2012 at 04:48pm
  • lil_angel666

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    It is a real shame those two don't get along better... hmmm

    Cal is kind of a creeper to be honest, I don't like him at all... I like Ollie better. That and Ollie and Maggie's relationship has potential whereas Maggie and Cal's looks one sided and Cal annoys the sh*t out of me... *clears throat* just saying

    OK I think ima done for now but update again soon please!!!
    December 10th, 2012 at 08:50am
  • rosamarie

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    meheheheh, awesome sequel so far. I would like to see more of Darren though, considering he's kind of like how Simon used to be. (I can't believe he's gone o.o) Anyway, update soon because you have an equally awesome sequel so far!
    October 4th, 2012 at 04:41am
  • sohohugges

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    your Amazing you know that right? i love this.
    September 30th, 2012 at 11:07am
  • ellaella

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    can't wait for more,ur awesome
    September 18th, 2012 at 06:48pm
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    OOOH I AM GETTING SO SUCKED IN.
    I really hope you update this soon! I don't know what to do now I have caught up haha.
    But I am all sorts of sad. Maggie's father, and now Darren!? I really hope Simon finds his ghostly self and drags him to the fires of hell. That would be great.
    And OLIVER. Come on man, this girl has gone through hell. You both have. Just chillski's, okay?
    I was honestly hoping that deep inside Oliver was Simon. Hell. I still hope for it. That when Simon jumped out of the building with his mother, that he met up with Oliver, who was still bordering life and death, and that Oliver told Simon to go in his place, to be with Maggie. IT'S JUST ME.
    But I can't wait for an update! Subscribing and recommending NOW. :D
    August 15th, 2012 at 11:02am
  • pawnsinplay

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    The beginning of this story broke my heart. I can`t imagine losing someone in a fire, and watching it happen. I feel horribly for Maggie. Darren scares the crap out of me. And Cal...I don`t know, but there`s something about him that just doesn`t sit right. Looking forward to more!
    August 13th, 2012 at 11:53pm
  • Naked_Freedom

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    Officially moved from Comment Swapper to crazed fan-girl!

    You were terrible in the beginning...then super frightening and now I am not quite sure how to feel about this Cal person. It's a wonderful mixture of emotions you've created, I am looking forward to the next installment.
    August 5th, 2012 at 07:00pm
  • toasteh.toast

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    I'm liking this so far! But I really miss Simon, at least he was in her dreams. That's better than nothing! I must say, the Darren stuff is creeping me out! If
    I were Maggie I'd put myself in a giant bubble. But she wouldn't do something like that.
    You have me guessing again! I want to know what's up Oliver's ass! I know a lot has happened but he should just be a man and tell Maggie what's up! Haha
    You do have a few punctuation errors. Only a few missing comma and then the capitalization in the dialogue.
    Can't wait to see what happens next!
    July 25th, 2012 at 03:02am
  • TheMisdirected

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    I thik the sequal is brilliant so far!
    July 8th, 2012 at 04:44pm
  • Cosmic_Fae

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    Oh my goooddddd. Darren is scary, and Cal is a bit weird, and SIMON I WISH YOU WERE BACK. I hope your internet comes back soon, because I'm dying for chapter eight.
    July 5th, 2012 at 06:22pm
  • Cosmic_Fae

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    OH MY GOD. YOU KNOW WHAT I THINK. I THINK THOSE "DREAMS" ARE ACTUALLY SIMON VISITING FROM HEAVEN. //shot oh god I am so crazy

    OH GOD I MUST READ ON. OH GOD SIMON, I MISS YOU WITH MAGGIE.
    July 5th, 2012 at 03:47pm
  • Cosmic_Fae

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    ' Waffles; of all things for them to have it just so happened to be waffles. I shook my head, pushing a few strands of my hair out of my face. At least this time it was something I actually would willingly eat.

    “Yeah, sure,” I said, stepping up to one of the bar stools where an empty plate was waiting for me. James slid two of the pancakes onto my plate, passing a bottle of maple syrup to me.'

    Wait. You switched from waffles to pancakes. o - o
    July 5th, 2012 at 02:23pm
  • Cosmic_Fae

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    THERE'S SO MUCH SAD IN THESE STORIES. I don't know if I can continue reading, I miss Simon. ; A ; Stopping on chapter three for now.
    July 4th, 2012 at 10:12pm
  • Love.Lee

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    I love that this story takes place in my favorite city Charleston, SC.
    June 23rd, 2012 at 02:16pm