I am so incredibly excited that you updated again!! I love this story so much, I want to marry it. I really hope that you update again soon. If you do, I can forgive you for taking so long with this chapter ;D
WAIT BUT WHY WAS HE IN THE HOSPITAL AGAIN? HmMmmmm! Curious, very curious. So shocked she basically told James to fuck off. That took some guts. Also can't tell if I like Cal or not. I do, but I'm still kind of suspicious of him. I don't know why, hm.
Hahaha, Thomas the tour guide... sorry, that reminded me of something. :P I'm going to throw a fit if her and Cal end up together- I'm still supporting Maggie and Simon. Anyway, I hope Maggie and Oliver can get along at some point... and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter! Hopefully your internet doesn't crap out again.
It is a real shame those two don't get along better... hmmm
Cal is kind of a creeper to be honest, I don't like him at all... I like Ollie better. That and Ollie and Maggie's relationship has potential whereas Maggie and Cal's looks one sided and Cal annoys the sh*t out of me... *clears throat* just saying
OK I think ima done for now but update again soon please!!!
meheheheh, awesome sequel so far. I would like to see more of Darren though, considering he's kind of like how Simon used to be. (I can't believe he's gone o.o) Anyway, update soon because you have an equally awesome sequel so far!
OOOH I AM GETTING SO SUCKED IN. I really hope you update this soon! I don't know what to do now I have caught up haha. But I am all sorts of sad. Maggie's father, and now Darren!? I really hope Simon finds his ghostly self and drags him to the fires of hell. That would be great. And OLIVER. Come on man, this girl has gone through hell. You both have. Just chillski's, okay? I was honestly hoping that deep inside Oliver was Simon. Hell. I still hope for it. That when Simon jumped out of the building with his mother, that he met up with Oliver, who was still bordering life and death, and that Oliver told Simon to go in his place, to be with Maggie. IT'S JUST ME. But I can't wait for an update! Subscribing and recommending NOW. :D
The beginning of this story broke my heart. I can`t imagine losing someone in a fire, and watching it happen. I feel horribly for Maggie. Darren scares the crap out of me. And Cal...I don`t know, but there`s something about him that just doesn`t sit right. Looking forward to more!
Officially moved from Comment Swapper to crazed fan-girl!
You were terrible in the beginning...then super frightening and now I am not quite sure how to feel about this Cal person. It's a wonderful mixture of emotions you've created, I am looking forward to the next installment.
I'm liking this so far! But I really miss Simon, at least he was in her dreams. That's better than nothing! I must say, the Darren stuff is creeping me out! If I were Maggie I'd put myself in a giant bubble. But she wouldn't do something like that. You have me guessing again! I want to know what's up Oliver's ass! I know a lot has happened but he should just be a man and tell Maggie what's up! Haha You do have a few punctuation errors. Only a few missing comma and then the capitalization in the dialogue. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Oh my goooddddd. Darren is scary, and Cal is a bit weird, and SIMON I WISH YOU WERE BACK. I hope your internet comes back soon, because I'm dying for chapter eight.
' Waffles; of all things for them to have it just so happened to be waffles. I shook my head, pushing a few strands of my hair out of my face. At least this time it was something I actually would willingly eat.
“Yeah, sure,” I said, stepping up to one of the bar stools where an empty plate was waiting for me. James slid two of the pancakes onto my plate, passing a bottle of maple syrup to me.'
Wait. You switched from waffles to pancakes. o - o