Kuchisake-onna - Comments

This beautifully creepy!! Thanks for recommending this to me, I loved it! Certainly one of the top stories here on mibba! I love scary, horror things, so this is right up my alley! It definitely gave me chills! Taking the urban legend and creating this story is brilliant!

I just want to say this is my favourite story on mibba I have read it like 9408573409857.5435 times and yeah it's pretty much the only one-shot with a 1000+ word count that I have actually read by choice

This was really good. I love reading and watching things that refer to Kuchisake-onna. I think you did a really good job with this. :3

Awesome- this story creeped me out and had sort of an eirie vibe to it.I think that's a thing, right? I love horror so this is right up my street

This was amazing. This is one of my favourite Japanese urban legends. I loved reading this, it was extremely well-written. Your layout scared me - but that's to be expected, and it set the mood for what I was about to read. I also love the fact that you included the urban legend into your Author's note. Well done, this was amazing.

I have to admit, I'm not a big fan of horror, but I love retellings of traditional tales, so had so mixed feelings here!

Overall, I was rather impressed. Your grammar isn't flawless, but I didn't find it too distracting. What I really loved was the way you made this story feel so natural, almost like an actual legend. There's a certain quality that just makes it feel like a story you would read aloud around a campfire, ad I love that about it.

I'm suddenly very happy that the banner was taken down. xD From what the other users were saying, and from the story alone, I don't think I would have been able to handle it. This story is so creepy. It was wonderfully written, and I love how you didn't describe anything, really, but the woman's looks; it provides such an aura of mystery as well as horror to it all. I also love how you made the girl so young, as it was a little more realistic as she addressed the woman first. It had a Joker theme to it all, and it was just...so scary. There's not many other words to describe it. Beautifully written and portrayed, but God...this is pretty great for your first horror story! Amazing job. :D

After the first few sentences I was thinking: Kira, from Death Note and then later: the Joker. And then I got kind of excited thinking 'What if those two teamed up?'

I think this is very nice, maybe not the scariest, but very good in detail and for your first attempt at horror, very good.

Ok so my first instinct is to scroll ....FAST because that banner creeps me the hell out.
I'm not really into horror stories or movies and i have no idea about Japanese urban legends, so personally its not my thing.
But your writing is very good, you put effort into great detail and that can be appreciated :)

Oh and I will have trouble sleeping tonight...

Such a brilliant idea, great storey layout as well it really gave me the creeps.

well written and I cant wait for more.

Oh my flippin' freakin' hell. It does not help that I'm reading this at night.

I don't like Japanese based horror films because they're so darn scary. I mean really. I don't know what it is about them that make them that way but they just are.

Your banner doesn't help my imagination at all.

First off, your banner is really creepy, and is the reason I waited until daytime to read this. I'd already heard of the lengend before and so had an idea of what to expect, but I still found this rather scary. Good job!

Woah ._. I got the chills a little bit. I really liked this :D When I envisioned it in my head, I envisioned it in anime. I could totally see this becoming an anime :P

I like it but in the middle of the story my house phone rang and it sarced me.

This story gave me the shivers :|

I LOVE IT ^^

I remember my brother telling me this when I was young, I got so scared and I was always one of the first people out of school after that XD
You did a good job with this story

That's really creepy! I loved it! Your banner was totally haunting but it was amazing! I loved how you gave a little historical background on the urban legend :) Great job!

This creeped me out so bad...especially the banner. But it was soooo good. I'm actually scared to sleep now. :o but it was amazing.

Oh My Gosh! Your story is so hauntingly good, your picture scared me and i was kinda scared to start reading but once i started i couldnt stop i felt like i was watching a movie the way you describe everything puts a vivid picture in my mind and it was great! I didnt know of this urban legend but i love it, cant wait for more if you do write about another urban legend. Where did you find your picture btw its awsome.