This Hell or the Next? - Comments

SquiddyTheMouse (100)

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Ok, this story is not a failure. It's fucking amazing <3

September 8th, 2012 at 10:36am

KilljoyBekah (100)

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Although you say this is a first draft, I really enjoyed it. I didn't expect vampire to show up at all! And then at the end I couldn't believe he was gonna kill him! So sad! I'm gonna check out the rest of your stories :)

August 14th, 2012 at 08:15pm

Haylie Jaed (325)

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Wow, that was unexpected! When I started reading, it seemed like it was going to be one of those fluffy, our-life-is-perfect kind of stories, and then BAM! Vampires! D=

Unexpected, but exciting.

It was a tragic read, though. My heart aches for poor Gee. =(

xoxo
HJ.

June 12th, 2012 at 07:00am

username007 (100)

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This was incredible. It made me want to cry though which proves how good you write.

April 23rd, 2012 at 11:29pm

rosayello (100)

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wow, this is really good. I loved it :)

February 2nd, 2012 at 10:56pm