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  • Theo Rossi;

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    This is an amazing story. I love it more with each update.
    December 20th, 2012 at 07:50pm
  • I'd.Be.Your.Tears

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    it does not get worse and worse! with every update i love it more!! :D
    please don't give up on this story, its one of my favourites!
    December 20th, 2012 at 01:27pm
  • BleedingHearts

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    If it's any consolation, I think it's was brilliant, your writing is amazing.
    Wherever this story goes, it'll be awesome and beautifully written.
    December 20th, 2012 at 12:15pm
  • Still Dreaming

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    Don't be so hard on yourself! This was cute!
    December 7th, 2012 at 01:33pm
  • silent bones ;

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    I just read the whole story in like two hours and I've been in love since the first chapter. You're an amazing writer. Fuck, everything sounds so beautiful and flows so naturally and I just love it all. I can't seriously wait for more! Freaking brilliant :')
    December 7th, 2012 at 03:45am
  • Flying Flawed

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    Noooooooooo, I really liked it, don't put yourself down. BTW I got my first tat in October and it didn't hurt AT ALL. Like really hurt less than a bee sting and I'm alergic to bees. Haha of course I have a really high pain tolerance but still.. really nice!
    December 7th, 2012 at 12:38am
  • BleedingHearts

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    Don't say that, it was still a pretty good chapter :)
    Blake's just gorgeous!
    December 6th, 2012 at 11:39pm
  • I'd.Be.Your.Tears

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    that last sentence just made me melt inside :)
    i love this so much, hope you update soon!!
    November 23rd, 2012 at 02:55am
  • LithiumQueen

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    That was really good! It was sexy, somewhat kinky, yet not super detailed, so it you did get the feeling it was lovemaking, instead of pure sex. Good job! Loved it!
    November 22nd, 2012 at 12:53pm
  • love2luv

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    yayyy(: I loved it!! Personal question; where do you live if you are on summer break from school just now?
    November 22nd, 2012 at 08:37am
  • Still Dreaming

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    They're so cute!
    November 22nd, 2012 at 07:38am
  • BleedingHearts

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    Very well written :)
    November 22nd, 2012 at 06:19am
  • BleedingHearts

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    I do love this story :)
    Go Peter!
    November 5th, 2012 at 10:52am
  • love2luv

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    I loveed this(: Way to tell his parents off!
    November 4th, 2012 at 07:50pm
  • Swampy

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    I love this story ad I cant wait for more soon
    November 4th, 2012 at 06:12pm
  • bahannahpeel

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    Finally <3 yes!!
    November 4th, 2012 at 04:49pm
  • Still Dreaming

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    Awwwwwwwwwh! How cute! I love it! <3
    November 4th, 2012 at 12:57pm
  • Theo Rossi;

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    This made my day even better than it already is:) I can't wait for the next chapter:) I love it<3
    November 4th, 2012 at 04:55am
  • BlackRosesBleedBlack

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    It's all beautiful <3 oh gosh, can I buy his art?! That sounded damn amazing! Love this so much~
    About the sex... Write however much you think is enough for the story :)
    October 14th, 2012 at 08:33am
  • done in love.

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    ah,yay an update! i'm on my kindle right now and i usually dont comment awhen i am because its extremely difficul to type on this damn thing, but i just have to comment now. i love where yourw taking this anx i can just imagine how much better it wil get. as for the sex scene, it would work either way i think, so you dhould do whatdver you feel works best.
    October 8th, 2012 at 04:33pm
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