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  • Earl Of Slander

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    Oh man so much has happened within the past 4 chapters I don't even know where to begin. The drama was out of control for every character and it was so incredible. I laughed when Oli had a cameo appearance. I think he is so great and the way you portrayed him was fantastic. And then Josh punching Parker was just the icing on top of the cake. I had had enough of that motherfucker.

    Also, the scene that really had me going emotionally was when Elissa was talking to Ketley about how miserable Josh is without her and how, if anything, he wants his best friend back more than anything. The way you wrote it...I just love it so much. It really had me seeing things from his perspective. This entire time I've been rooting for Ketley because he has been such a dickbag, but when it was put in that light, I just felt extremely sorry for him. Being torn between two people you love in different ways has to be difficult and takes a toll on him.

    And five more chapters? Holy shit this story is just making time fly by!!!
    I can't wait to see what other tricks you have up your sleeve ;)
    February 6th, 2012 at 04:18pm
  • Don't give up on us.

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    Can't wait to see what happens next for these two (:
    February 6th, 2012 at 03:10pm
  • haiialiciaa

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    wow oh my god this story is amazing please please update soon! :)))
    February 6th, 2012 at 02:11pm
  • nativelungs

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    Finally!
    February 6th, 2012 at 01:36pm
  • breeanaleee.

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    This is so good! They need to just have sex and get together or something!
    February 6th, 2012 at 10:46am
  • xoxo_aj_xoxo

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    I am really hoping for josh to start doing something about these two. I would like to see her just explode on him and just tell him how she is feeling. I think that way there will no longer the awkwardness about how they are feeling. I know I didn't really make sense there but anyways. Looking forward to more.
    February 6th, 2012 at 09:38am
  • ally...

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    Love the part with her at her job with all the girls, gotta love the pre-teens. I can't believe the story is almost done, but I'm hopeful for a reconciliation!
    February 6th, 2012 at 08:50am
  • hip to be square

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    SO KEEN FOR MORE OH MY CHRIST please update soon <3
    February 6th, 2012 at 08:26am
  • tmdaisy22

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    I really hope that they will finally be able to work it out! Loved this chapter, can't wait for more:)
    February 3rd, 2012 at 07:28am
  • fightmytongue

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    i just have a feeling hanna's gonna catch em being all friendly and ruin it :c
    February 2nd, 2012 at 10:14pm
  • purple_em

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    I think drama is going to happen.
    February 2nd, 2012 at 07:11pm
  • erika_xtc

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    I really hope that she hasn't forgiven him that easily just yet though.
    February 2nd, 2012 at 06:32pm
  • nativelungs

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    Just read all the chapters to this and I love it! Only wish Ketley wouldn't have lost so much innocence
    February 2nd, 2012 at 01:28pm
  • xoxo_aj_xoxo

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    Well this is a good sign. I was so glad that she didn't turn up. Update again soon ^.^
    February 2nd, 2012 at 08:14am
  • vices

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    AWH.
    AWH AWH AWH.
    that was coot c:
    I love how Elissa's just like, "bitch. talk to my brother or I'll rip your vagina out." all underneath,
    and Ketley's just like, "you look like you need a friend." DLKFhsdlkfasldkfjaL;KFJ;dklfjdk
    HE NEEDS A FRIEND
    AND A GIRLFRIEND
    AND SOMEBODY TO LOVE
    AND UGH KETLEY
    THAT'S YOU.

    Image
    February 2nd, 2012 at 02:32am
  • lovelyhope

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    I'm so glad they're being nice to each other again. I just hope it lasts. And Hanna better not change her mind about coming to America and randomly show up.
    February 2nd, 2012 at 02:20am
  • MYP

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    Awwww I love this!!! Thank god for his goddamn girlfriend not showing up haha. Ketley making nice with him is perfect, and I cannot wait for what will happen next! Hopefully it involves Josh not being stupid, breaking up with his girlfriend and realizing that Ketley is awesome. I really love her hahaha. I cannot wait for more!!!
    Update again soon please!!!
    February 2nd, 2012 at 02:14am
  • hachie

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    I think everything go fine between Ketley and Josh, they'll slowly become friends again but then Hanna will come and mess everything up.
    To tell you the truth, Josh's reason to stay with Hanna is really quiet pathetic!
    I mean he just looks the other way when Hanna cheats on him and only keeps her around so he could have as he said it, 'warm body to lay with'.
    He could have the girl of his dreams, the girl he fell in love with so deeply but he chooses a girls that cheats on him and doesn't even tell him that she isn't going to come!!!!!
    I am glad that Hanna didn't come, she'll just cause unnecessary drama between Josh and Ketley.
    I can't wait for the next update!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    February 2nd, 2012 at 01:24am
  • AnyaMai

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    Oooooh, they're gonna talk :D
    I'm even more excited for the next chapter!
    Update soon <3
    February 2nd, 2012 at 01:00am
  • LookingUp93

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    can't wait for the next chapter :D
    February 1st, 2012 at 05:32pm
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